Hunter of Worlds: Phase1-Chapter8
Obviously accesories like a shoulder holster and other trinkets were not critical to his performance, but they certainly would be nice to have. bullets were definitely a must.
Chapter 27: Determination! Altered Evolution!
I do accept any critics and comments. and most of all thank you for those who participate and help in my story.
Surface (Chapter 3)
- ugh, i wasn't saying that to criticize your work. - i know, that's just what it felt like there for a minute. - well, okay, it was. you don't have to act so singled out, you know i believe in applying critical thinking to literally everything.
The Tales of HTFC - Medic 4908 - Adam
John had done a pretty good job stopping up the blood, but he was still critical. as the nurse ran up to me, i signed the paper.
Central City Trilogy: Wishes - chapter 3 The Utilitarian’s Moral Obligation - 3.4
Meanwhile, you have five other patients who need critical organ transplants, which could be obtained from the healthy animal. would you sacrifice one healthy animal to save five sick ones?"
Orelai- Pregame Routine
The criticisms the people in triessa gave him were genuine criticisms but they were only being fair and assessing him based on the rest of the team and comparing him against korin, who everyone knew he was there to eventually replace.
Common Ground
He'd put their criticisms out of his mind. holy men had always been 'kadosh,' outcasts and pariahs. the average person had not been holy, so if one had been to be holy, one had to resolve not to be merely like the average person.
Tales of Zootopia: Wynn
Wynn got restorative treatment to take back what was stolen from them by their parents (foreskin, because all science ever says it's important), and wynn and georges willstein-halcyon wrote three trilogies of novels, all of which received massive critical
14 Ways to Cope With It All
.** it's easier to be critical of a situation or a person, especially if those around you are doing so. don't let others be a negative influence on you.
Finding Myself
Constructive criticism is welcome and the only flames i want to see are the kindles of love between these two dragons. when i first allowed my eyes to gaze upon him, it was like i viewed into a mirror.
Welcome Back to Cappuccinos! Part 4
Venti's ear flattened at the criticism. _i'm over thirty years old, outweigh him by a half ton, and bench press more weight with one arm than he can with both,_ thought venti. _so how does me feel like a midget around him?_ "yessir."
A Tale of Lost Souls: Part One
I'm looking for some criticism so if you'd like to help me improve, and if you want more, message me. i may or may not keep writing it in second person, that'll depend on the response i get from this chapter.