Vietnam Goldfish Hunt
The critics and publishers willingly share a boat like the twins did. "i have an idea." patricia says. "three of us get in the water and one keeps watch of our stash." "i'll do it." eddy says. "good.
Tactical Alliance of Intergalactic Life
This theory is heavily criticized however but the critics admit that they cannot come up with a more convincing theory to replace the fragmented asteroid theory.
Hunter of Worlds: Phase1-Chapter8
Obviously accesories like a shoulder holster and other trinkets were not critical to his performance, but they certainly would be nice to have. bullets were definitely a must.
Chapter 27: Determination! Altered Evolution!
I do accept any critics and comments. and most of all thank you for those who participate and help in my story.
Surface (Chapter 3)
- ugh, i wasn't saying that to criticize your work. - i know, that's just what it felt like there for a minute. - well, okay, it was. you don't have to act so singled out, you know i believe in applying critical thinking to literally everything.
The Tales of HTFC - Medic 4908 - Adam
John had done a pretty good job stopping up the blood, but he was still critical. as the nurse ran up to me, i signed the paper.
Orelai- Pregame Routine
The criticisms the people in triessa gave him were genuine criticisms but they were only being fair and assessing him based on the rest of the team and comparing him against korin, who everyone knew he was there to eventually replace.
Common Ground
He'd put their criticisms out of his mind. holy men had always been 'kadosh,' outcasts and pariahs. the average person had not been holy, so if one had been to be holy, one had to resolve not to be merely like the average person.
Wander over Yonder: The Frozen Princess
"_artificial intelligence systems are... critically damaged._" the voice didn't sound all that intelligent to sylvia. she assumed that the "critical damage" had caused the ships intelligence to be... well... less than intelligent.
Sacrifice without Gain is pointless
Inspired by the visual novel: blackgate it is sort-of the finale scene of a longer piece that i probably won't ever get around to writing constructive criticism is appreciated as i closed the door it disappeared, phasing into the wall around it.
Chimera - Chapter 6
He criticized, boring. while he was about to take a sip in his glass, a cow greeted him, shy: "good evening." "yes, hello." "i'm sorry for asking, but... are you alone?" "yes. yes, indeed."
Introduction: Abandoned
**** post thoughts, constructive criticism, and other comments in the comments below. ^^** * * * introduction: abandoned by snowiri the crystalline droplets of water flooded the desolate landscape around the broken canine.