Tactical Alliance of Intergalactic Life
This theory is heavily criticized however but the critics admit that they cannot come up with a more convincing theory to replace the fragmented asteroid theory.
Hunter of Worlds: Phase1-Chapter8
Obviously accesories like a shoulder holster and other trinkets were not critical to his performance, but they certainly would be nice to have. bullets were definitely a must.
Chapter 27: Determination! Altered Evolution!
I do accept any critics and comments. and most of all thank you for those who participate and help in my story.
Surface (Chapter 3)
- ugh, i wasn't saying that to criticize your work. - i know, that's just what it felt like there for a minute. - well, okay, it was. you don't have to act so singled out, you know i believe in applying critical thinking to literally everything.
The Tales of HTFC - Medic 4908 - Adam
John had done a pretty good job stopping up the blood, but he was still critical. as the nurse ran up to me, i signed the paper.
Orelai- Pregame Routine
The criticisms the people in triessa gave him were genuine criticisms but they were only being fair and assessing him based on the rest of the team and comparing him against korin, who everyone knew he was there to eventually replace.
Common Ground
He'd put their criticisms out of his mind. holy men had always been 'kadosh,' outcasts and pariahs. the average person had not been holy, so if one had been to be holy, one had to resolve not to be merely like the average person.
Vietnam Goldfish Hunt
The critics and publishers willingly share a boat like the twins did. "i have an idea." patricia says. "three of us get in the water and one keeps watch of our stash." "i'll do it." eddy says. "good.
Wander over Yonder: The Frozen Princess
"_artificial intelligence systems are... critically damaged._" the voice didn't sound all that intelligent to sylvia. she assumed that the "critical damage" had caused the ships intelligence to be... well... less than intelligent.
The Legend of Zelda: The Totem King- ch 5 Transformation
Bairda started examining her, like some sort of art critic over a statue. finally, he backed up. "she smells like the queen," he stated, apparently pleased. zelda wasn't. "you _smelled me?!?_ disgusting!"
"Daggers of Darkness" - Epilogue
I only ask that you please keep criticisms constructive and polite. story, characters, and related art © 2013-2017 ronald j. lebeck (that's me).
musket prologue: chapter one, intro
#1 of musket i am using this part of the series for a school assignment. the capitalization is not there because the writer doesn't use them in letters. this is my first furry story so criticism is recommended. also another thing, i probably will upload this