The Outlander 2 16
This is the first chapter of his saga and legacy. it's about..." "hehe, don't spoil it for me," sandokhan chuckled.
The Hunter's Choice Chapter One: Young Blood
Again as i said before this is my first story and i would like feedback good and bad but please be gentle with the bad feedback but yes i will update with chapter two when i get enough time but for those who do tea this first chapter and like it i promise
The Start of Something New: Chapter 1
#1 of the start of something new the first chapter in an overarching story i'd like to do. i just hope enough people will like it!
Bloody Red Sun of Fantastic L.A. : Part I Chapter I
This is the first chapter of the story. this part is mainly going to deal with personal strength and endurance. i know that sounds weird but it will become more apparent in later chapters. any comments, criticism, and/or suggestions are appreciated.
Every Artist's Dream: Chapter One
The first chapter of every artist's dream. critique is appreciated. :3 the sun's rays woke avery up the next morning. he stretched and let out a big yawn, obviously still tired, but, unfortunately, needing to get up. "holy shit, i need coffee."
It's Dueling Time!!!! ch.1
Also, thank you both for making me do this) this story came from my heart and soul in this first chapter so here it is. chapter one of it's dueling time!!!! i'll se you later!!!!!!!
Under the silver moon P1
Welcome to the first chapter of this little series i plan to write. inspiration goes to "north guard" by creative writing. please go read their story! (after this one!) enjoy!
Bleeding Fire
So ends the first chapter.
After the Bombs
=== thus ends my first chapter. criticism is definitely encouraged. ^^
Wanderings Teaser
I know that there isn't much going on in the story as so far, that's solved when the first chapter really starts. constructive criticism would be helpful as i'm not sure how good this is. any feedback at all will motivate me to write more.
Chapter 1 - Flashbacks
The first chapter of astralis' story. general sarnaci... that name struck fear into so many people. he wasn't known for his uncanny deftness or his masterful swordsmanship.
Guardian IV Omake: Spec Ops Tigers
Guardian iv: omake spec ops tigers (to read this chapter, you must agree with the disclaimer and copyright posted in the first chapter.)