Raidenraijin smells a mary sue
dogato:
mary sue?
o-o
03:25i need to reform and refine it.
raidenraijin:
dogato: bingo
mchanga fisi of the sands.:
okay going to read it now.
chat, writing
The only time he had to meet with mary was lunch, it seemed. maybe even before school, but he did not know when she arrived or where she would be at such a time. he would have to ask her, perhaps tomorrow, he concluded.
Fox, Plot Development, School, Story Series, Wolf, buddies
"mom, dad i want you to meet someone, sky these are my parents jack and mary, mom, dad this a new boy at my school sky." "nice to you both." he said with such politeness. "nice to meet you too young man like my son said i'm mary."
Blood-sucking, Female, Fire, Gay, Kissing, Love, Male, Rape, School, spring break
By sipping my beer, i shoot the breeze with mary, a she-wolf around my age. with lucas, she's one of the very few people whose i can talk about something and this, it's great.
Akio, Comedy, Drunk, Lucas, Male/Male, Night, Romance, Shiba Inu, Snow Leopard, Story, chunky
mari giggles.
"please," hafsa waves her off, stiffening to a cartoonishly haughty pose. "i'm far too busy for men. they're beneath me."
"someone's trying to change the subject!" kiki snickers, nudging marisol. the flamingo smirks back.
Angst, Drama, Mystery, Pigeon, Romance, Serval, Sheep, Suspense, Teen Romance, Thriller, Tiger, Tigress, caracal
mary, go prepare the ship to take off. we'll see you two there."
"yes sir," they both said. the smaller wolf followed mary off the bridge.
"who's natasha?" alex asked, not directing the question at either wolf.
"i was," answered the ai.
Wolves, pack, survivors
She nods and guides mary and marcus out of the room.
before she leaves mary turns back to me with a smile on her face, "thank you alpha seeker, for helping him through this." i smile back, "it's my pleasure."
M/M, No-Yiff, Plot Development, Story Progression, Story Series, Transformation, Werewolf, Wolf
And for glaux sakes, try not to make your character a complete mary sue, which is a character with no faults whatsoever, and is perfect in every way.
as always, read and review. this is sampd out.
Avian, Clean, Fanfiction, Fantasy, Owl, Transformation
Watching the younger guys play catch up and getting to know bensen and marie is really opening up some doors too.
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Age Difference, Anger, Anthro, Anthropomorphic, Arguement, Arguing, Canine, Celebration, Coyote, Deer, Demon, Doe, Emotion, Emotional, Equine, Fantasy, Father, Fox, Horse, Hugging, Hyena, Jackal, MILF, Magic, Magna-Verse, Mare, Mother, Mystic, Mystic Fox, Mystic Wolf, Party, Rabbit, Romance, Sci-Fi, Science Fiction, Skunk, Son, Space, Unicorn, Vixen, Weasel, Wolf, argue, sadness