Day of Dawn Part 1 (Fairy Tail Fiction)
Xd feedback. i demand feedback! always give me your honest opinion and also what you like and/or dislike. ^^ day of the dawn (fairy tail fiction) "what are you guys doing back in my house?!"
Moving On
Would still like some feedback! :3 the pain, the anguish. he pushed it aside, surprising himself. a single tear dropped, yet again unheard as it splashed into the pool. "a pool of... my tears?" he said aloud, jumping at the sound.
Brood Father ch.5
I love to hear writing quality feedback. it helps me improve more than just simply reading and writing does alone. maybe you've got your own angle and opinion being made about some of these characters you'd like to share. i'd love to hear them.
Wedding Mouse, 1 of 7
Respectful feedback is, as always, very appreciated. ---- //: 2105, city of minneapolis. university of minnesota. troy hunched his head down, ducking out of the physics lab. his breath frosted in the early winter air, he realized first.
1)Dragon On My Mind
I tried to avoid yiff for my first story sorry if that disappoints some of you but i'm not to good with it yet....or maybe i am i'm just doubting my self....but either way if i get decent feedback with this then i'll make another till then see you later.
Dragon Reincarnation part four
Thank you for the faves on the previous chapters and your feedback i appreciate it! \<-\>6\<-\> it has been almost four months since i came back and starting learning magic.
Jackdaw Ch. 01: Assignment
Please don't hesitate to provide feedback on the story so far, and if you have any suggestions for where i could take the story, i'd love to hear them! 3 pages, almost 2,000 words.
Dragon's Reign - Chapter 1: Dragon's Dawn
Author's note: for writers feedback is essential to fix mistakes, avoid repetitive ones and most important, to improve their style, so they can give you the content you like.
Prologue
If there's one thing i've learned from the customer feedback of the people who own the other bowman's wolves, it's that chief among our many unique skills is the ability to cause trouble. i never wanted to make trouble for anyone.
Cold as Ice Stub
I want some feedback on it. if you want to see more please comment! if i continue it it will be adult (maybe not for the first few chapters or so) but i wanted to test the setting with people on here.
Math Class #1
* * * * * * feedback is always appreciated! i honestly don't know if i'll continue this... so don't get your hopes up. while writing this i listened to beach house's new album depression cherry. its really good! go give it a listen!
Invention of the Week #2: Dragon Pearls
It's been a week since i released the maid machine, which received pretty nice feedback! glad you all like becoming maids for an hour. hopefully my invention can force you to clean the things you've been telling yourself to clean.