Black Velvet (Prologue of an unfinished story)
Please provide feedback. all criticizes, whether constructive or not, will help. prologue she regained her consciousness, but not her memory of where she was or why she was here. the world came to her focus, the fox finally saw the blood on her hand.
Rebirth, prologue
#1 of the cycle of the phoenix: rebirth this story is here partly as a teaser and partly because i need some feedback to get motivated.
A New Look
As always, constructive criticism and feedback in general is highly appreciated.
Shadow
Migrating over here to hopefully get more feedback on my poetry and short stories (although most of my stories are on the back burner, i am halfway through with one, so stay tooned imaginary people who read my things!)
Callion: Forgotten Lands
All of these characters are mine and so is the story, if you enjoyed it leave some feedback!
Story Concept 1 (ASU)
Depending on how much feedback i get, i'll continue playing with this concept
Hearts Fairy
This isn't even all of the first chapter, but i would love some feedback on this story. prolouge hearts is not a fairy. don't let her apperance fool you, she is part dragon.
Small Town Surprises
Small town surprises well first story posted and depending on the feedback there will be a continuation of this one.
Small Town Surprises
Small town surprises well first story posted and depending on the feedback there will be a continuation of this one.
Memories
This is kind of new for me so in feedback for me. and try to guess what i'm trying to describe if you think you can get it. i'm sure if you can you can see it in your mind right now. seemed like it was forever ago doesn't it?
Memories
This is kind of new for me so in feedback for me. and try to guess what i'm trying to describe if you think you can get it. i'm sure if you can you can see it in your mind right now. seemed like it was forever ago doesn't it?
Crusader Epilogue
Often they were interpretations or one of many paths, only when the feedback would hit them from the scrying would it get reviewed and even then it could simply be glazed over.