We Regatta Get To Egypt
We managed to get ahead of the critiques and the publishers. we're no longer in last place. how can there be a problem?" suddenly, they hear a beeping sound. zax looks over at the gauge and sees how much gas they have left. almost empty. "yep."
A Long Way From Home - Darkmoor pt 1
Comments and critiques always welcome, and feel free check out the original f.a post over here: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/22671922/ it was with rattle and moan that the barred caravan traversed the lonely dunes of darkmoor; adrift within an ocean of
Percy's Life Part 1 - The Mighty Caterpillar
As always, critique and comments of all sorts are greatly appreciated!
A troll after my own heart
If you would like to join us in our literary exploits, here's the link https://t.me/joinchat/cpoezhclggenroeh0yywvg critiques and comments are appreciated. a dim light. that was all i had in these abandoned hallways.
The Lead Crown: Ch 9.3a, Accountability
Comments, questions, quandaries, critiques, and input is always appreciated. thanks for reading!
Marillion - Chapter 1
I would love some feedback and critique though. :) **marillion** a wise man once told me; 'light never touches those who embrace darkness'. at least, i think that's what they said to me.
Silverback Episode 8
As always, please let me know what you think, all comments and critiques are appreciated.
The Scout's Run: Chapter 1
Lastly...or forth; i welcome any questions, comments, and critiques! this is my first posted work of writing pretty much ever.
The Subject
As always, comments, critique, and anything else you want to provide is greatly appreciated! fire away! "sir? we're ready for you." i jerked from my stupor, blinking away the glaze of hours i'd spent in the puny waiting room, "huh? oh, uh, right..."
Forsaken
Harsh critique would be appreciated, and even not so harsh comments would be nice too. enjoy!
A Fateful Fall Encounter
P-please respond (with critique, preferably). it was a peaceful autumn evening at the park. children exhausted from a long day of playing in the leaves were taken back home by their mothers.
Jeremy 093; Its Not The Slope Its The Lack Of Friction
Our motive in asking you to join is to use your critique to help make the program better each time its offered." the otter stood looking up at jeremy. he was clearly thinking over what had been said. "i appreciate that.