Dog Cracking
So give him a +watch if you can cause he's a great person :d i would also like to thank ticklishfurry (or fa: ticklishfurry ), he's been a great friend and really supportive :) hope you enjoy and please comment all you want, i love constructive critique :
The Lead Crown: Ch 9.4b, Shock and Awe
Comments, questions, quandaries, critiques, and input is always appreciated. thanks for reading!
Breakroom Treats
critique welcome! cast: bodbloat as steve "bod" bodbloat: the owner of pumpz magazine. a lava drake. vrghr as vrghr "vrghr" vrghr: the head of the cooking and food section.
Acadia's Curse: Chapter 2
critique is welcome!\ chapter 2: locals half asleep, i felt the train lurch and then shudder as it came to a rest at the acadia train station. my heavy eyelids parted to a fuzzy world.
The Maryville Amazing Maize Maze
More than anything she was curious about the exact mystical nature of the labyrinth, if for no other reason than to critique it. it obviously had a temporal distortion quality to it. she didn't know how long she had been walking or how far.
Marillion - Chapter 1
I would love some feedback and critique though. :) **marillion** a wise man once told me; 'light never touches those who embrace darkness'. at least, i think that's what they said to me.
Silverback Episode 8
As always, please let me know what you think, all comments and critiques are appreciated.
The Scout's Run: Chapter 1
Lastly...or forth; i welcome any questions, comments, and critiques! this is my first posted work of writing pretty much ever.
The Subject
As always, comments, critique, and anything else you want to provide is greatly appreciated! fire away! "sir? we're ready for you." i jerked from my stupor, blinking away the glaze of hours i'd spent in the puny waiting room, "huh? oh, uh, right..."
Forsaken
Harsh critique would be appreciated, and even not so harsh comments would be nice too. enjoy!
Starway
I want to learn how to do better, so i will gladly read and acknowledge any critique or comments you have._ _this story is dedicated to my wonderful, perfect boyfriend. without him, i would still be hanging off of a cliff by one finger, or worse.
The Lead Crown: Ch 9.3a, Accountability
Comments, questions, quandaries, critiques, and input is always appreciated. thanks for reading!