Writing Tips vol. 2

_ _the falling snow swirled in the wind, the flakes forming writhing figures in the air._ see? not _nearly_ as interesting.

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U.C.O.D. Return of Justice: Chapter 7

She looked around quickly, trying to figure out what was going on. she was surrounded by shadowy, translucent figures, bustling around her but never touching her.

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The Lonely Dog Who Did Not Know

"but, i'm trying to help you" said the dark figure. the dark figure was slowly creeping out of his hiding place. the dark figure has revealed himself to be a wolf. the wolf came right up to lucky and examined his body before proceeding.

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The Beginning Of The End

"and i'm g-glad you figured out a way to get m-michelle here, too." "you wrote the note?" i asked. "but why?" "b-b-because you need to know what's really going on. i f-figured it out. well the v-vast majority anyway." "ok." michelle said.

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A Bump in the Night Special: Crossing Spots (Repost)

It intensified; the figures gently dissolved, and then vanished into thin air. the lone figure stood alone, and he stared up at the sky in disbelief. a wretched scowl filled his face and he tossed his weapon to the ground in disgust.

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Journey to another world pt3 ch100 pt3

As the figure continued to emerge from behind the curtain, the person/figures dress could be seen.

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A Chance of Showers - Part Six

"don't sweat it," kip reassured him, "it sounds like you're trying to figure a bunch of important stuff out right now, and none of it has to be decided overnight. and i promise you, i'll help you figure things out.

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Axel & Rena Part 18 By: Renatamer

Though still somewhat asleep, it wasn't hard to figure out that he had a shapely female in his arms.

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A trainer's story [34]

How i figured out a way to control my aura?" "uh huh." "well, things started about 5 months ago, when kai and i were training for the battle frontier."

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The Scent of a Lover Part 15

The sawn off behind my back was wiggling behind me as i tried to pull the gun at the figures but couldn't out of fear. i didn't know the 2 figures at the door personally but i knew the clothes they were wearing.

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Burdens - Chapter 11: Transition

They seemed to be well done, but not something bought, so he figured someone they knew had made them, or they gained them from an amateur artist. he figured he would inquire about it at another time.

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Laws and Regulations Ch 2

Would you feel comfortable staying at my house until everything gets figured out?" he ears pricked up as she lifted her head and looked into my eyes, like she was trying to figure out if i was lying or not.

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