#4 A new friend (Discontinued in favor of rewrite)
> update: after having learned some new things by trial-of-fire and reviewing my work, i have decided to rewrite "across the multiverse" to give the story a better flow.
Why porcupine has spines?
Also, if you guys like the concept of the story not the story, can tell me to rewrite because i wrote this in 2 hours :p so it's pretty sketchy. thanks again! one day, porcupine was riding on the back of elephant in the jungle.
Chatline: Epilogue
Since this is my first story, i really want to go back and give it a complete rewrite since there is so much i did and didn't do because i didn't yet know how to approach it or just didn't know better.
Snippet: Chapter II - A Dragon's Rampage
#3 of wolf/dragon: rewrite snippet: a piece of a whole. this may vary in size of object, subject, illustration, animation of just plain text. well, this is a snippet of chapter ii.
Dragon's Heart Ch. 7
However, i will go on to rewrite and work on this. family reunions and bruises ray watched as his son was being taken care of by the ship's doctor.
Dissociative Identity
I've gotten some complaints about this one being confusing and i did a bit of a rewrite to try to make it more straightforward, but you should probably be familiar with the helper's universe before reading it.
Old Home, Part 3
Then, after rewriting things, you wonder "but does this sound interesting?" and finally, the whammy. you wonder "which of these three do i really need more?" neil clambered up to the second floor hall, his undead pursuers hot on his heals.
To Love
However, i think it's rather pretty in spite of how i've moved on stylistically, and though i don't want to devote time to rewriting it, i thought a few other people might like it.
Chapter 39: Within Desperation Come a New Hope
The data engulfed al's body and starts rewriting the data. al's body starts shattered into grid. the grid starts expanding into the size of geogreymon. the grids slowly covered by datas to form a skin or scale.
Dodekatheon Pantheon
His software can rewrite civilizations or engineer the collapse of one. all things that depend on mechanical or artificial design are within his purview, and he can effect startling changes in all of them.
Writing Assinment: 5 min write, 5 min rewrite
Assigment: set the timer and write for 2 minutes about yout current location, then spend the next 5 minutes rewriting and editting draft: > it's almost 11:30 pm here in my room and i'm tired as hell.
Recovery, Step One
"so, is there anything in the rewrite i should take into consideration?" you asked in that monotone we had come to expect. i gaped at you. "you're rewriting it?" i exclaimed, dumbfounded. you nodded. "you're telling me this is the draft?" you nodded.