The Lead Crown: Ch 6c, Ghosts of the Past (Pt 3)
The wolf-dog quickly revised whatever he was going to say, "so... out the back?" sada nodded, "out the back."
ROI - Chapter 16: The Red Stone
In the meantime, i shall review and revise some of the chapters while at it. so. i would like to thank you. one and all. for continuing to read this little tale of mine. i will see you next time.
The Hardest Life PT.4
Fennex revised on what he saw. "i just closed my eyes and i saw these two scenes, each of them had a human animal like me and a dragon nearby..." fennex waited for drogon to reply. "what did they look like?"
extinction log
revisions to my method of dealing with sean should be considered. 61230.167.04.52 entry twelve by zertan. sean refuses to eat or move. this is concerning. i theorize he is going to try to self terminate again.
Chasing the Sun - Chapter 02: An Honest Step towards Lies
Maybe i'll revise this chapter in the future._
Valkyrie - Book 1 - Chapter 9 - The Rat in a Cage (Revised Edition)
#9 of valkyrie - book 1 - fate and rebirth (revised and reedited) chapter 9 - the rat in a cage location: everonth mountain excavation site the rain heavily pelted the landscape, morning had come and the rain had still not subsided.
NanoWrimo: Flexible Survival 5/?
(gets you all revisions as the story progresses, available in all popular ebook formats, only 99 cents): https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/101172?ref=dmsilver we emerged onto telegraph in the murky grays of morning.
Recon
I've edited and revised this first chapter heavily, and as i write this, i have three more segments toward its completion. if you'd like to see what happens more quickly, please consider joining my patreon.
Lizzie
I will be revising it often, i bet, because i loved this idea. i've had it in my head for about a year now, and hated everything i tried to do for it.
A Soldier's Memory
revised as of 9/24/2012. kiani stood in the fields, a good hundred yards or so, from where the infamous landings of kino island had taken place.
Lucario: A Pokemon Trainer (Chapter 1)
I didn't revise this heavily, but i hope you all like it! enjoy! and yeah, i submitted it as artwork because i liked the pretty picture i drew. :) lucario: a pokemon trainer "professor, what made you choose such a strange specialty for study?
The Life of Another - Chapter 5
"jason, we need to revise the projections for our 3rd quarter budget, with the passing of mr. prescott we have to assume that revenue stream is closed although i wouldn't be surprised if our clever benefactor has a final gift for us."