The Lead Crown: Ch 4b, Your Highness (Pt 1)

The majority of his traveling party was injured-- two critically so. regardless, they had a destination to reach. it wasn't a home to return to, per se, but it would hopefully be the salvation for cruff and the antelope man, tobias.

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Enigmas for Thought

Alex asked, frowning, "it's critical thinking skills; to question what you think you know," "but can you question the innate assumptions you make in everyday life?"

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Adapting to Change: Chapter 1 Part 1

Ok, seriously, i would like criticism and other forms of 'help this writer becomeanudderparson'... ahem.. 'become a better person'.

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Realms of Fantasy Chapter 4: Refur a Friend

As always, all constructive criticism is welcome. enjoy!

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Leviathan Chapter Four: Saurian

Leviathan's blood oxygen was critically low and it did not take long to figure out why. the taste of silt filled her mouth and upper digestive and respiratory tracts and most of her body was immobilized by a thick, pasty substance.

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Writing to Caroline

._ _there must be no strain in the relationship itself as such in the successful story and critically acclaimed movie "jupiter rising" or also critically acclaimed "twilight"._ _that only applies to novels or stories where romantic involvement is a heavy

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Military Doctrines and Attributes, and the Road to War

Instead, wesitaria was forced to deploy massive levels of force overseas and give likuria critical breathing space. likuria has several major differences from kantaria.

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Coming Out

Constructive criticisms are always welcome, so i can understand where i can approve on. [intro] today's a very cold morning but i'm going to go outside (x4) good day [verse #1] will i lose myself? as i start exploring the outside?

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Chakai OC info

Any advice and constructive criticism welcome. background chakai is an open source ai. available as a free download on a website with hundreds of other ais. the reason there are so many different ais is due to the limitations put on them by law.

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Incomplete Life Portrait

Constructive criticisms are always welcome, so i can understand what i can approve on. the come to dust and burn down the tower characters in incomplete life portrait are copyrighted to tiberius rings.

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Reintroduced to Vulnerability

Haunting memories drive me forward but the amber eyes of rejection do not break the gaze is ever foreboding, always present the nightmarish daydreams concocted small moments that propel volatile imaginations visions that drive emotions into a spiral critical

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Fuzzy Form

And finally, comments and constructive criticism are welcome as always. thanks for reading! **-- fuzzy form --** unblinking eyes greet upon entry, the smirk - perpetual.

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