The Lead Crown: Ch 4b, Your Highness (Pt 1)
The majority of his traveling party was injured-- two critically so. regardless, they had a destination to reach. it wasn't a home to return to, per se, but it would hopefully be the salvation for cruff and the antelope man, tobias.
Adapting to Change: Chapter 1 Part 1
Ok, seriously, i would like criticism and other forms of 'help this writer becomeanudderparson'... ahem.. 'become a better person'.
Black Magic - Chapter Nine: To A Safer Place
He wouldn't lie about something so dire, so important, so critical. in thinking that, i felt comforted, knowing that i still had a friend like him to rely on.
Enigmas for Thought
Alex asked, frowning, "it's critical thinking skills; to question what you think you know," "but can you question the innate assumptions you make in everyday life?"
1. An Ordinary Life
"please let this be a good one," kendra thinks, craving the respite only a well-spun story can provide for her overly stressed and critical mind.
Star Fox: Changes of Love Chapter 4 The Press Conference
Back in the soda shop on corneria, everyone present was angry and criticizing what they had just heard on tv, even though general pepper had not finished the conference yet. dash began to feel nervous and scared by all of this.
My Guardian Demons - Part 1
They didn't command me to do things, or criticize my every action, but seemed to be content with forming a sort of commentary track to everything i did.
Military Doctrines and Attributes, and the Road to War
Instead, wesitaria was forced to deploy massive levels of force overseas and give likuria critical breathing space. likuria has several major differences from kantaria.
Incomplete Life Portrait
Constructive criticisms are always welcome, so i can understand what i can approve on. the come to dust and burn down the tower characters in incomplete life portrait are copyrighted to tiberius rings.
Chakai OC info
Any advice and constructive criticism welcome. background chakai is an open source ai. available as a free download on a website with hundreds of other ais. the reason there are so many different ais is due to the limitations put on them by law.
Fuzzy Form
And finally, comments and constructive criticism are welcome as always. thanks for reading! **-- fuzzy form --** unblinking eyes greet upon entry, the smirk - perpetual.
Reintroduced to Vulnerability
Haunting memories drive me forward but the amber eyes of rejection do not break the gaze is ever foreboding, always present the nightmarish daydreams concocted small moments that propel volatile imaginations visions that drive emotions into a spiral critical