Enigmas for Thought

Alex asked, frowning, "it's critical thinking skills; to question what you think you know," "but can you question the innate assumptions you make in everyday life?"

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1. An Ordinary Life

"please let this be a good one," kendra thinks, craving the respite only a well-spun story can provide for her overly stressed and critical mind.

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Star Fox: Changes of Love Chapter 4 The Press Conference

Back in the soda shop on corneria, everyone present was angry and criticizing what they had just heard on tv, even though general pepper had not finished the conference yet. dash began to feel nervous and scared by all of this.

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My Guardian Demons - Part 1

They didn't command me to do things, or criticize my every action, but seemed to be content with forming a sort of commentary track to everything i did.

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Leviathan Chapter Four: Saurian

Leviathan's blood oxygen was critically low and it did not take long to figure out why. the taste of silt filled her mouth and upper digestive and respiratory tracts and most of her body was immobilized by a thick, pasty substance.

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Realms of Fantasy Chapter 4: Refur a Friend

As always, all constructive criticism is welcome. enjoy!

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Pokemon - Tale Of The Guardian Master - CH 41

"the man looks to be in critical condition. if we don't get him into the city now he could be a goner." one of the officers muttered. "i suppose the pokemon is just doing its job... but we didn't bring anything to sedate it with though... should we...?"

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Military Doctrines and Attributes, and the Road to War

Instead, wesitaria was forced to deploy massive levels of force overseas and give likuria critical breathing space. likuria has several major differences from kantaria.

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Dragons Never Burn (Prologue Idea)

Constructive criticism is very much appreciated! i'm a dragon. i'm an old dragon, with many things to teach. a dragon without power, or without the power other dragons are born with. i'm a blank slate, i'm neutral, and the future is mine to protect.

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Loonatics Uncut: Series Notes

And so, here's hoping you enjoy the work - comments are eagerly welcomed, both praise and constructive criticism. i've already got the first 'season' of the 'show' planned out, but some edits are undoubtedly going to happen.

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Teasing the Guard - Story Excerpt

This is the first story i have ever posted here, so you can be critical, just don't tear me to pieces please?

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Poem #60: You

Every part of who you are is what defines you and you should value every piece sometimes you gotta take a step back and take in the whole picture all at once to realize what you are really seeing and it isn't easy to think it's hard to criticize

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