Dissociative Identity
criticism is welcome. ^^
Just a project
Any criticism would be much appreciated may go into more details later on but yes... tell me what you think and if you would like to see this continued "let's go over this again." said the rugged slightly gruff sounding doberman police officer who
Pale Blue Dot - Blurb
Today, he is hosting a herbivore scholar from ares, discussing a collaborative project critical to his doctoral thesis. as he grapples with past memories and the nuances of their interaction, he is approached by a strange mutt.
I, Dacien - Chapter Two - Investiture
Did not sasha a moment ago point out a critical flaw in my thinking? one that teodor made, and ianthos, and metrios?" "ah," said teodor. "well. as to that. i plead ... almost guilty." "almost?" said metrios. "almost.
The Start of Something New: Chapter One
All criticism is welcome and encouraged._ _most chapters of this story are already finished, and will upload them dependent on comments._ chapter one: new arrival it was the same mundane routine for the fox known as streak.
The Ideal Furry
-doesn't resent the human race -doesn't depict "anthros" as the pinnacle of purity and overall good-guyness - accepts all forms of criticism no matter how harsh - honestly tries to improve their work - tries to finish their
Ragefire Captive - Chapter 1 - LFG
#1 of ragefire captive ragefire captive by merle tags: [straight] [lesbian] [belf] [orc] [rape] [oral] [bondage] [whipping] [rape] [humiliation] [cum] [gangbang] [anal] [lesbian] [drugs] [rape] [torture] any creative criticism is much-welcomed
Two Trainers Talking
You only got lucky from that critical hit. besides, who uses ice types? they suck!" he shouted back, making the weavile open an eye for a moment. being an ice type, that was somewhat offensive to her.
Universe of Conflict Chapter Seven
"no kidding... the nurses told me your were critical!" "oh hell no, i have had worse then that; besides! what do those gown-wearing tards know about my body?
Galactic Conflict - Chapter Four
This is the third alien race we found still fighting the creepers out here, and even though there numbers are small, it is critical we save them." the roar of a transport ship alerted the wolves that their ride had arrived.
The Road Of Life - Chapter 1
Let me know what you think about it (constructive criticism is loved and welcomed). i'd also love suggestions, and ideas!
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He loved him so dearly and he was amazed that he never heard a critical word about his nightmares and the commotion they caused at the strangest hours. the new sheet was quickly in place, looking so soft like pure white snow.