Golden girl of Wagstaff: Chapter 3

Martha's tone was enough to tell that such commentaries made her upset, mariella recognized her mistake but remained silent. "and that's where i want to get. love between dogs is, different, you know" "how so?"

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The Same Heartbeats Chapter 2

Careful of what you say jeff" says the mother frustrated "you must be happy that zhane is making new friends" "fine, i'll just wait and see how things turn when my dad finds them 'studying' on his room, if you catch my meaning" paula just scoffed at the commentary

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My Sword, My Clan 19 - His Darkest Hour

._" the rest of the commentary listed various other participants from other regions of ivalice before the tournament would start.

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UTOverse: Glamorous Alien Rock & Roll part 8

Though, it doesn't take a genius to figure out you're not here for commentary on your human handling technique." mae returned to her senses. she'd almost forgotten why they were here amidst the compliments.

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Three Furs, One House

We all turned to the tv onstage to watch my fastest lap of the track, clarkson providing his usual commentary on it. "so, how do you think you've done?" he asked at the conclusion of the tape. i took a look at the dozen names on the board.

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Fenrir: New Beginnings

Her tail lashed behind her with bubbling anger at the wolf's thoughtless commentary, and for the first time, fenrir remained silent. watching the leopardess, fenrir realized her dedication.

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Zootopia: Brave New World - Aftermath

Soon the animals were nearly kicked out of the room by bogo, and alex was actually quite thankful for this, and the room once more returned to the silence that it was before, with only small commentaries made by moosard and ferris.

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Filling the Void - Chapter Six

Dagen kept up a running commentary on his work, but was far more interested in watching what victus was doing.

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Face in the Mirror Chapters 1 and 2

Emo, however, the upcoming chapters will be a bit better (i hope) * * * face in the mirror alpha-centauri chronicles book 2 a loonatics unleashed fan fiction by pyry cole hopefully i won't disappoint... make sure to send suggestions, commentary

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The Family Vulpes Chp2

It would have been cause for a sigh of relief, if val hadn't been concerned that making any form of noise at this point would simply invite more awkward commentary from the older tod.

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Born from the Ashes - Prologue

Thanks daralyn _ **side notes for readers:** _ **--- if you want to know a little more, read the commentary below the story first.** **--- the parts written in** _italic_ **,**** although stated as direct speech, are actually thoughts of the main protagonist

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Tea is Served

The stallion offered only fairly obvious commentary, as if his tongue had been loosened by the camaraderie; the drake was impervious to the effect of her usual female's wiles, his own conversation speaking of everything and nothing.

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