Junior Year: The End
I'll go back and do revisions when i have the time for it. thank you to everyone who has read and rated and reviewed. it really makes a world of difference to me, to hear feedback. i hope you enjoyed it, and i hope you're content with the ending.
Valkyrie - Book 1 - Chapter 11 - The Culling of Chentrilla (Revised Edition)
#11 of valkyrie - book 1 - fate and rebirth (revised and reedited) chapter 11 - the culling of chentrilla location: new haven new haven was a small town that lay on the edge of the chentrilla delta.
Valkyrie - Book 1 - Chapter 6 - Darkness Rising (Revised Edition)
#6 of valkyrie - book 1 - fate and rebirth (revised and reedited) chapter 6 - darkness rising location: everonth excavation site the ship jolted again, it felt as if a herd of elephants were pounding the side of the vessel and that the ground beneath them
Spyro: Return of Darkness, Chapter 11 -- Eternity Begins Today
I might put up a revised version of this, who knows...
Throw It All Away
Wooo heres the story i told ya abouts, this ones reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeal old and i havent really revised it yet, and in total probaly took 25 mins to write, so enjoy. and remember this is one of my earlier stories, and!
Chapter 3: Revalation or Denial?
I have to revise my plans now." yamizephyr observed. yamizephyr teleported away. xenorosth was shaken. xenorosth stood there in the woods, unsure of what to do. he was tired of these meaningless fights.
Young Loves Demise: Chapter One
I didn't like the way it was going, and i was never particularly proud of the first chapter, but the rest of it was just in need of some revisions and a different path. never did finish it, only a couple of chapters into it before i basically gave up.
Valkyrie - Book 2 - Chapter 1 - Night (Re-edited and Reworked)
#1 of valkyrie - book 2 - the guiding light (revised and re-edited) chapter 1 - night terra was a broken world. the planet had suffered numerous failed resistances against the power of the asgard.
Break, or How I Became A Superhero
:p update: i've revised the story, added about seven hundred more words. enjoy. :p ==== my name is break and i am a superhero. god, how arrogant does that sound? but it's true (after a fashion).
Trials: Chapter III
I had to revise the old paperwork for his medical history, myself now written as the legal guardian, removing our parents from the contact lists. later in the night, lewis's phone rang, waking me up from a horrible dream.
I'm Alien or a Time-Traveller... or something. (Six)
#6 of an alien so here's a slightly revised and vastly added to version of this. the original posting was a bit weak and thanks goes to orkinman for pointing out the problem. anyway, here's something better.
Balanced on the Knife Edge Ch. 16
Her eyes gleamed covetously as soon as nusha revealed the draconian madstone, and she barely listened as they told her the revised version of their quest. she gave them a thousand septims and ordered them away before they caused a ruckus in town.