Chasing the Sun - Chapter 35: Heavier than Feather
Besides, this file revision was a chance to apologise. he would do them well. for now, the panther stayed on the bed. kevin shifted and turned to lie on his back, his muzzle slightly open. octo took the chance to observe his wolf.
The Cannon of Civilization
Didn't really revise it that i can remember. i just figured i'd put it somewhere instead of letting it fester in my documents folder for the rest of eternity. :p i dunno. if you like it, say so.
When rumors turn ugly
It was a second revision, but it would do the job needed. plus some solar panels should they need a jump start. now all he had to do was put it all together. while in the process of repairing the ship, his boss and long time friend stopped by one day.
Armageddon: Prologue Rewrite (Teaser)
Also, keep in mind that what you see here is open for any revisions that i decide to make, and is not representative of what you will see in the final cut. feedback is always appreciated, too._ * * * hey there!
The Stray Cat, Ch. 4
I had to do a fair amount of revising in this one (which was all deleted because i'm a noob at this site so i had to do it all again), but i think it's much improved now. enjoy! i forced myself to open my eyes.
Locked inside-out: Ch.1 Mixed indecisions
First person view has never been my forte but i thought it might help to expand, and this story was thought up on a point to point plot and single revision. i don't plan for it to go too in depth.
The Creation Of Xrohne Chapter #1
If you are reading this currently, forget about this chapter, and read chapter #1 revised, that's the better of the two, sorry if it caused any inconvenience
Pride Podcast
"give me a break liberal, don't you have history to revise?" "yeah chase, won't you say that sydney and tj are just really good friends?" carl said, pretty much cackling.
not so quite romantic first date, part 2
Know ive put this off for a long time and well a lot of things have happened that is changing the story as well the main character is gonna be my characters new update who is an otterfox cameron is going to be called isaac and is a tolf also i will be revising
Longing
After some revising done this morning, i've created a story in my own little world that you can now explore (though i use the word little loosely here).
Valkyrie - Book 1 -Chapter 8 - Flashback (Revised Edition)
#8 of valkyrie - book 1 - fate and rebirth (revised and reedited) chapter 8 - flashback location: helfhiem (gateway, homeworld) - on the edge of terran space, before the "great scar" approximately 300 years ago it was raining on
(Revised Edition) Human Origins Chapter 1: Beginnings
Human origins chapter 1: beginnings hello, fellow humans and furs, after letting this story sit on sofurry for awhile while i worked out some problems in real life, i felt the need to revise it a little bit and add a little bit of detail.