The Lead Crown: Ch 9.5b, Shock and Awe
Comments, questions, quandaries, critiques, and input is always appreciated. thanks for reading! tranquil waters: the lead crown ch 9.5, shock and awe tobias had visited the newport cathedral often in his youth at the behest of his father.
Writer's Block
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The Scout's Run: Chapter 1
Lastly...or forth; i welcome any questions, comments, and critiques! this is my first posted work of writing pretty much ever.
A Companion for Life (Part 1)
Ryan and emily nodded and went to critiquing their work. at the bus stop sam walked towards the cliff. he was so engrossed with his music that he didn't realize ten students following him. "i still think this is a bad idea keith" one of them said.
The Lead Crown: Ch 9.2b, Shock and Awe
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Soft Like Snow- Ch.1
Please critique, as i am always looking for help with writing! \*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\* the snow fell lightly and steadily upon the cobblestone road, covering it with a thin layer of white.
Legend High-Chapter 13
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Blood Rose-4
Anyhow, comments and critiques welcome! add me as a friend and spread the word if you enjoy my work. :3 enjoy! "i need no food as of now. the sisters feed me well." she added and looked off into the distance. she tried to remember her family.
A Long Way From Home - Darkmoor pt 1
Comments and critiques always welcome, and feel free check out the original f.a post over here: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/22671922/ it was with rattle and moan that the barred caravan traversed the lonely dunes of darkmoor; adrift within an ocean of
The Lead Crown: Ch 9.1c, Legacy
Comments, questions, quandaries, critiques, and input is always appreciated. thanks for reading! tranquil waters: the lead crown ch 9.1, legacy inigo was concerned about nicole's vendetta; they had talked... at length.
Bamyalee
critiques are welcomed and appreciated. i once lived, at the shores of bamyalee, where nothing else touches, but the sea. although filled with clear oceans, and skies of blue, this is not paradise, that is not true.
Blank Verse Essay On The Futility of So-Called "A.I." Art
Though they indeed were separate artifacts the meaning, the intentionality, of both were homoousion--the new and polished version, and the older rough that drove my husband nigh self-critique mad.