The Lead Crown: Ch 9.1b, Shock and Awe
Comments, questions, quandaries, critiques, and input is always appreciated. thanks for reading!
The Lead Crown: Ch 8.5b, A Dozen 'Tails' Told
The floor is now open for questions, comments, and critiques!
The Lead Crown: Ch 8.4a, Rude Awakenings
The floor is now open for questions, comments, and critiques! tranquil waters: the lead crown ch 8.4, rude awakenings princess noriene held her own council as the party made its way through the sewers.
The Lead Crown: Ch 8.3a, Rude Awakenings
The floor is now open for questions, comments, and critiques! tranquil waters: the lead crown ch 8.3, rude awakenings gift-of-the-earth was thrown into his brother as the entire structure jumped.
Dragon Story Ch: 3
Please comment and critique if you have any suggestions or even just like it! :d i will be releasing at least a chapter a week! **chapter 3** the day had passed slowly, dervacor was sitting on a rock outside flicker's cave.
Furry Little Secret ch. 3
#3 of furry little secret ch.3 of fls, adult, just for safety, please give me your constructive comments and critiques komamura went straight for his bedroom when he arrived home.
Stonewalled
I'm new at this, so any comments or critiques would be greatly appreciated. anyway, i hope you enjoy! it was the senior class's last day of school at middleton high.
Umbro the Legendary Umbreon Chapter 1
Please critique me. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ a tragic loss so many pokemon live throughout the vast world.
The Lead Crown: Ch 9.3b, Shock and Awe
Comments, questions, quandaries, critiques, and input is always appreciated. thanks for reading! tranquil waters: the lead crown ch 9.3, shock and awe the fight against the church's men had been a tough one.
The Lead Crown: Ch 9.2b, Shock and Awe
Comments, questions, quandaries, critiques, and input is always appreciated. thanks for reading!
The Lead Crown: Ch 9.1a, Accountability
Comments, questions, quandaries, critiques, and input is always appreciated. thanks for reading! tranquil waters: the lead crown ch 9.1, accountability the princess' travel carriage was a grand affair.
The Secret Shinx
So... yeah enjoy the story and feel free to critique in the comments ^^ poppy awoke to the sound of birds singing a merry tune, one that seemed to sound like one of her favorite songs.