Guardians: Downfall
Off in the distance you could see multiple firefights and in the sky's, thousands upon thousands of ships fighting each other with a few distant nuclear explosions from ship reactors that had gone critical.
Aleisha's Story - Chapter Two - Aftermath
"you can go in, but please - do not be long, she is still very critical, and we'll do all we can to help." he stood aside and opened the door, allowing aleisha's parents to enter, before he closed the door and sighed quietly to himself.
You ARE a writer! : Srsly (2nd step on the road to success!)
The best places to find material of this nature are in serious literary criticism type books, doing things like dissecting the structure of the novel or discussing how the author brings their life experiences into their works.
"BLEU" - Harmony
I came across uncountable debates and critics regarding accuracy, but they were all missing a crucial point. they always came to conclusions too quickly, always believing that there is a finite conclusion to the infinity of human nature.
5 Voice
criticism? comment away! the bleach-white stones were blinding and hot. birds circled overhead, faces naked and grotesque, grey claws ready, teeth sharp and rancid.
In Love With You.
If you're gonna criticize, remember: you're criticizing the "me" from years ago. i don't wanna change them cause, well, i made them at that age. don't blame me if you hate it. i thought you're the one who was trying to...
Shayla and Luke; Part Two
Please do comment if you have any positive suggestions or constructive criticisms. if anyone wants to talk to me then add my discord account 'simply fulcrum#9999' and my discord server is [https://discord.gg/kt9bshr](https://discord.gg/kt9bshr).
For you, my Heart; for you, my Soul
You are strong within, my heart know that, forever, i'll be your guard construcitve criticism appreciated. however remember, this was my first poem ever so don't tear me into pieces because it is bad or something.
Zootopia In-Depth Review
Zootopia is beloved by critics, acclaimed for its incredible animation, great characters, and intriguing storyline. another reason many critics love zootopia is the film's underlying message on prejudice.
Poem #19: Yo Pense (I Thought)
Its about reflection and critical thinking of the world around us. i've included the english translation.
Changes of the eclipse: Chapter 3
#3 of changes of the eclipse: chapter 1 **_im not really big on authors notes ^^; but here is chapter 3 hope you guys like it and please feel free to criticize on what you think is good or bad about "changes of the eclipse" dont hold back on your opinions
Chapter VIII
"critical blood loss." "trace bone fractures." "internal hemorrhaging." "collapsed lung." as the doctors listed the numerous injuries. the team got progressively amazed and depressed. how was he still alive?