The Maelstrom

All comments and criticisms are welcome. on which note i am kind of having trouble just writing down my feelings, which is what i believe poetry should be, and keeping to the "format" of poetry being certain symmetry, etc.

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Two Nuts And A Bolt

Constructive criticism and suggestions are appreciated. **_chapter 01_** **_a new project_** it was an average morning at blue wolf customs.

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Ryota's biography

Skills: - resistance in 5% to the grass and electric types in critical condition. - absorbs sinister-type attacks and water boosting his attack by 5% curiosities: - he likes to find underwater treasures.

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Cuddlemeister

Tj thought it was a bit mean, but sydney reassured him he worded his insults in a way that jenna told him would provide constructive criticism. tj called jenna and she agreed, albeit not without subtly insulting sydney.

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A Stranger in Suburbia (An Interactive Story) - Prologue (18)

Mind you, i will be critical of any submissions, but hey, only one way to learn, eh?

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Uncomfortable Comfort

Comments and constructive criticism are welcome as always. :) **uncomfortable comfort** the halls were cold, the walls were bare. bleach stung the nose, but failed to mask the staleness of wrinkled flesh.

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Childish Response

Seems klandiro has a problem dealing with criticism, wonder how that friendly inkeeper's story goes it had been a few days since the klandiro made his way to edgewood, the canine having found a couple jobs around the village to help fund his stay at the _

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Writing to Caroline

._ _there must be no strain in the relationship itself as such in the successful story and critically acclaimed movie "jupiter rising" or also critically acclaimed "twilight"._ _that only applies to novels or stories where romantic involvement is a heavy

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The Lead Crown: Ch 4b, Your Highness (Pt 1)

The majority of his traveling party was injured-- two critically so. regardless, they had a destination to reach. it wasn't a home to return to, per se, but it would hopefully be the salvation for cruff and the antelope man, tobias.

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Adapting to Change: Chapter 1 Part 1

Ok, seriously, i would like criticism and other forms of 'help this writer becomeanudderparson'... ahem.. 'become a better person'.

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Black Magic - Chapter Nine: To A Safer Place

He wouldn't lie about something so dire, so important, so critical. in thinking that, i felt comforted, knowing that i still had a friend like him to rely on.

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