Zero Point: Chapter 2- Brave New World
Warning: power levels critical.
Cuddlemeister
Tj thought it was a bit mean, but sydney reassured him he worded his insults in a way that jenna told him would provide constructive criticism. tj called jenna and she agreed, albeit not without subtly insulting sydney.
A Stranger in Suburbia (An Interactive Story) - Prologue (18)
Mind you, i will be critical of any submissions, but hey, only one way to learn, eh?
Uncomfortable Comfort
Comments and constructive criticism are welcome as always. :) **uncomfortable comfort** the halls were cold, the walls were bare. bleach stung the nose, but failed to mask the staleness of wrinkled flesh.
The Maelstrom
All comments and criticisms are welcome. on which note i am kind of having trouble just writing down my feelings, which is what i believe poetry should be, and keeping to the "format" of poetry being certain symmetry, etc.
Two Nuts And A Bolt
Constructive criticism and suggestions are appreciated. **_chapter 01_** **_a new project_** it was an average morning at blue wolf customs.
Childish Response
Seems klandiro has a problem dealing with criticism, wonder how that friendly inkeeper's story goes it had been a few days since the klandiro made his way to edgewood, the canine having found a couple jobs around the village to help fund his stay at the _
Ryota's biography
Skills: - resistance in 5% to the grass and electric types in critical condition. - absorbs sinister-type attacks and water boosting his attack by 5% curiosities: - he likes to find underwater treasures.
Writing to Caroline
._ _there must be no strain in the relationship itself as such in the successful story and critically acclaimed movie "jupiter rising" or also critically acclaimed "twilight"._ _that only applies to novels or stories where romantic involvement is a heavy
Leviathan Chapter Four: Saurian
Leviathan's blood oxygen was critically low and it did not take long to figure out why. the taste of silt filled her mouth and upper digestive and respiratory tracts and most of her body was immobilized by a thick, pasty substance.
Realms of Fantasy Chapter 4: Refur a Friend
As always, all constructive criticism is welcome. enjoy!
Pokemon - Tale Of The Guardian Master - CH 41
"the man looks to be in critical condition. if we don't get him into the city now he could be a goner." one of the officers muttered. "i suppose the pokemon is just doing its job... but we didn't bring anything to sedate it with though... should we...?"