Zero Point: Chapter 2- Brave New World
Warning: power levels critical.
Childish Response
Seems klandiro has a problem dealing with criticism, wonder how that friendly inkeeper's story goes it had been a few days since the klandiro made his way to edgewood, the canine having found a couple jobs around the village to help fund his stay at the _
Cuddlemeister
Tj thought it was a bit mean, but sydney reassured him he worded his insults in a way that jenna told him would provide constructive criticism. tj called jenna and she agreed, albeit not without subtly insulting sydney.
Uncomfortable Comfort
Comments and constructive criticism are welcome as always. :) **uncomfortable comfort** the halls were cold, the walls were bare. bleach stung the nose, but failed to mask the staleness of wrinkled flesh.
The Maelstrom
All comments and criticisms are welcome. on which note i am kind of having trouble just writing down my feelings, which is what i believe poetry should be, and keeping to the "format" of poetry being certain symmetry, etc.
Two Nuts And A Bolt
Constructive criticism and suggestions are appreciated. **_chapter 01_** **_a new project_** it was an average morning at blue wolf customs.
A Stranger in Suburbia (An Interactive Story) - Prologue (18)
Mind you, i will be critical of any submissions, but hey, only one way to learn, eh?
Ryota's biography
Skills: - resistance in 5% to the grass and electric types in critical condition. - absorbs sinister-type attacks and water boosting his attack by 5% curiosities: - he likes to find underwater treasures.
Pokemon - Tale Of The Guardian Master - CH 41
"the man looks to be in critical condition. if we don't get him into the city now he could be a goner." one of the officers muttered. "i suppose the pokemon is just doing its job... but we didn't bring anything to sedate it with though... should we...?"
My Guardian Demons - Part 1
They didn't command me to do things, or criticize my every action, but seemed to be content with forming a sort of commentary track to everything i did.
Star Fox: Changes of Love Chapter 4 The Press Conference
Back in the soda shop on corneria, everyone present was angry and criticizing what they had just heard on tv, even though general pepper had not finished the conference yet. dash began to feel nervous and scared by all of this.
Black Magic - Chapter Nine: To A Safer Place
He wouldn't lie about something so dire, so important, so critical. in thinking that, i felt comforted, knowing that i still had a friend like him to rely on.