Malakye Anaris - Character Detail
#8 of malakye's story - character profiles & back stories righty-oh-then, in the build up to the launch of the first chapter of the sequel to the story 'a place to belong' i have decided to post a brief back story form some of the more important characters
Maiya Station Disaster: Part 1 – Message in a bottle
This is a parallel story to "ride of the valkyrie" that takes place roughly 2 to 3 years after the events of the first chapter "proving grounds" though this is a very short chapter, not even 1200 words long, however, this is in part due to me not wanting to
Bruce and Danny Ch. 1: A Hesitant Father
This is the first chapter of a story that i'm writing. it tells the story of a kodiak bear named bruce and his adopted son danny.
Chapter One: A Fresh Start
#1 of the city of stars this is the first chapter of my latest project! let me know what you think. "guys? guys come quick! i think he's waking up!" three shadows suddenly blocked the harsh lighting that had blinded the young raccoon.
Humanity: The Predecessors, Ch. 1
#4 of the predecessors this is my first chapter. i'm sorry i didn't really introduce my main characters yet, but i'll get there. i just take time getting there. please review this, so i know what i can improve on, or add. mr.
Spiral Nebula - Epilogue
The first chapters of cosmic stars are now available while i continue writing the rest of the chapters. all around her lay the infected dead, illuminated brightly by the ship's light.
The Hunter's Choice Chapter One: Young Blood
Again as i said before this is my first story and i would like feedback good and bad but please be gentle with the bad feedback but yes i will update with chapter two when i get enough time but for those who do tea this first chapter and like it i promise
Chapter 1: Surprises
#1 of series this is the first chapter of the first story i have ever written. critisms welcome as well as edits and what-nots. im working on the next chapter already. please let me know what you think and any ideas.
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I uploaded the first chapter
Human Experimentation: Redux: Beginnings
. ||||||||| ok, so that was the whole first chapter, and most of you that read this i hope you've read th original human experimentation. so this is where i leave off for today, and i will give you more as i write the next chapters.
After the Bombs
=== thus ends my first chapter. criticism is definitely encouraged. ^^
Born Anew: Prologue/Chapter 1
I've finally posted the first chapter of the story i've been working on. the first bit is actually an edited version of the original from two years ago.