Ragnarok - III
Because the alternative would require more rewriting than i have in me at this point. and ask your patience with my younger ignorance. "these ruins have been empty for too long. they ring no more with scarlet laughing flags.
Korongo: The Beginnings - Chapters 1-3 Rewrite
# Chapter 1 Kali stretched and yawned; the grass felt soft and comfortable on her back and she gazed absentmindedly at the little fluffy clouds that hung in the sky. Today she was relieved of hunting duties and had earned a well-deserved rest. The...
An Experiment Gone Wrong? CH.9 (Rewrite)
(rewrite) this is the most recent chapter that was released on 10/06/16 and is a bit shorter due to that chapter eight was posted only a week beforehand.
An Experiment Gone Wrong? CH.8 (Rewrite)
(rewrite) morning came around as you slowly open your eyes, what you see in front of you is a snout belonging to asriel and his arm draped over you. "_hmm, i'm having a strange sense of_ _déjà vu.
An Experiment Gone Wrong? CH.7 (Rewrite)
(rewrite) you emerge back into the field you initially enter before finding yourself in the magic space of ellana's home. yawning, you noticing the sun starting to raise and start you trek back home.
An Experiment Gone Wrong? CH.6 (Rewrite)
(rewrite) of course sleep is what you like to be getting right now, but apparently your mind has other plans. you keep thinking about that book and map the old women gave you. hell you never even got a chance to ask her name.
An Experiment Gone Wrong? CH.5 (Rewrite)
(rewrite) days fly by quicker then you expected and you found yourself in front of the barrier. your family is there to see you off.
An Experiment Gone Wrong? CH.4 (Rewrite)
(rewrite) in the morning you yawn and stretch out as you rub sleep from your eyes. you sit up and look over at the desk where you'd laid the book toriel gave you. you get changed and grab the book putting it inside your pocket.
An Experiment Gone Wrong? CH. 3(Rewrite)
(rewrite) in the morning you awaken to find yourself staring at asriel, he's still sleeping peacefully, mouth slightly agape with a bit of drool pooling onto the pillow. you can't help yourself as you give a quiet chuckle so not to disturb him.
An Experiment Gone Wrong? CH.2 (Rewrite)
(rewrite) as you sleep you dream of the trials and test you went through in the laboratory. you stand at a distance watching a large creature with fangs, horns, and wings enter the domed room you are in.
Checkmate
I really do hope to rewrite the opening, and perhaps expand the story in the future. special thanks go to my friend, toru, for his skills as my editor. i hope you enjoy this first story of mine. comments and constructive criticism are always welcome.
Nathanriel's Fate: Chapter 4
And we'll get more into it later but the merchant's guild actually plays a bit larger role in the rewrite. in the original they were there and controlled everything but that's all they ever did. they were mostly neutral. not so much anymore.