My dad is dead (revised)
I don't know if I miss him or not. Did I really know him? What was I for him? Was I his redemption? Did I really care about him or was my relation to him just selfishness? I wonder if it is supposed to feel like in normal families. My dad was an...
Chapter 2 - The Eggs (Revised)
Many months has pass as I woke up one morning in May. I arose from his back and ready to get kissed since I agreed to be Kailina's mate but nothing. I opened my eye expecting to see the big dragon in front of me. But nothing. I had a flash back at the...
Fathom's Phantoms, Ch 5: It's Only the Beginning
Mike nodded to himself, tweaking a few words and revising one of the sentences before uploading it, and he continued the playback.
Vanguards of the mine
Now in front of the wall to breach the katk squad is preparing and revising its equipment. shield and protek making sure their armor is fitted correctly and that the counterweight arm for their shield is calibrated for combat.
(Revised Edition) Human Origins Chapter 3: Interest
revision #3. i'm working on getting the rest done. enjoy! human origins chapter 3: interest a new chapter to my series. enjoy! "....."
Stretto's New Suit
#1 of fan fics ahhhh just a lil revision of a thing i wrote from a picture i drew. a bit of an exercise for me :3 hey there! this is my first attempt at a real mlp fic thing. i'm new to furry writing d; hope you enjoy?
A Bronze Rising: Out with the Old
I will revise the story at once!" tobias said, turning his horse about. i raised a paw, "not quite yet. i want you to summon a wood worker here first thing in the morning.
Merlin's Revenge Chapter 19
revision of history was the in thing after all. if you didn't like how yesterday went, change it. everyone knew a person's memory was a fickle thing. did she have it on video? was there witnesses?
Antler to Antler - Part 5 (Revised)
#7 of antler to antler **a/n - normally i don't like to revise work i've already published, but because the intent of antler to antler was as a screenplay which i have yet to produce, the original posting was always intended to be viewed as a draft rather
Precious Memories (Act1, Book1, Chapter3)
#3 of twilight of the gods book1 revision divergency here - i split the old chapter 3 into two parts during the august 2015 revision! so ... there's that.
I Surrender (SFW)
When i'd returned to the fandom, and started sharing revisions of my old stories, it only seemed fair that the very first story i'd written got remastered first.
Only Human (revised), Chapter 3
So, here is chapter 3 of the revision of only human. enjoy. * * * the halls of the station seemed about how nathan expected, just wide enough for two to walk abreast with pristine white walls and an occasional terminal.