Torpedo Run - Chapter 1 (Revised) and 2
I've done some suggested revisions to the first chapter, and am putting up the second at the same time. please feel free to give creative input, or correct my military information, etc etc.. also, could you guys do me a huge favor?
Nation - The Greater Haromian Empire
If it weren't obvious by some of the numbers being tossed around, things are... quite huge with the new revisions.
Eternal Mortality: Ian Fastolf
Perhaps what ian is most infamous for, is the revision of the gray watch. as most know the gray watch started out as an honor guard for various fursons of importance. however, ian seen potential for much more.
Tropical Revised - Chapter Eight
Soft chirping noises breached Rye's bedroom, carried upon the back of a chilled breeze, which rustled Rye out of his slumber and away from a very pleasant dream. Uncertain of which memories were a dream or real, Rye was slow to open his eyes and awake....
Sundog
Probably needs to be revised [and i should revise it before uploading it... oh, well.] but i'll take care of that later. might continue with the concept, mayhaps. dunno. we'll see. enjoy.}}
Digging in the Dirt, part 1
_-seres north_ original version: sept 28, 2007 revised version: sept 17, 2009 additional revisions: mar 8, 2010
The Spider And The Fly (A1, B1, C12)
#12 of twilight of the gods book1 revision august 2015 chapter -12- the spider and the fly _june 23, 2:05pm, pdt_ _san francisco, california_ ...
Wereness 6. The Migration
--"don't have a month and need to read up on morphology revised as well." the head nods and makes a sound like clearing its own throat before a speech or lecture.
A Measure of Worth: Chapter 1
The extensively revised first chapter of my furry historical fiction romance novel: a measure of worth! this is not a set-in-stone product yet so i still encourage feedback!
Tropical Revised - Chapter Nine
School continued normally for the next couple weeks, and as time passed, the newly formed couple grew more comfortable with their relationship while around their friends. Several times after a long day at school, the otters and their friends would find...
Behind Locked Doors | Finale
I don't know if i'll go back and revise them later, but maybe i will. i understand, as this was my first project i have many areas where i need to improve. some of you have already told me and i thank you for your constructive criticism.
Ceryx Expedition Species Log #2: Royals (Addendum article#1)
A quick refresher of their revised description will be provided. the "royals" as it has been heard they refer to themselves. stand on average 10-12 feet tall with 3 pairs of arms and legs.