Expansive Imprint - Thursday Writing Prompt
critiques are always appreciated. there are faux pas, and then there are _faux pas._ certain things one absolutely did not do.
A Different Kind of Tank
Feedback and critiques are much appreciated.
Acadia's Curse: Chapter 1
critiques are very much welcome! chapter 1: moving day! "please don't go!" mitzi squeaked, wrapping her small body around my leg like a snake. i tired pulling her off but she continued to latch on and cry.
The Exile
In the lunar capital on the moon, suddenly, the king was starting to act weird, usually the king loves tonitrua as if he is his own son, he is being abused and to the point he got thrown off and crash-landed to the earth (you can stop at this point) any critique
The Lead Crown: Ch 9.4a, Accountability
Comments, questions, quandaries, critiques, and input is always appreciated. thanks for reading!
Brother Light, Brother Dark: In Which a Loose End is Tied Up
All comments, critiques, and criticisms are welcome.** across the countries, donichus rode. he knew talos was behind this, figuring that the bounty hunter he'd hired had gotten to jaqaran and was no doubt bringing him back to his former master.
A valuable lesson: Chapter 1
critique away! and let the typo spotting begin! the stage was humming with the vibrations from the amplifiers. his eyes closed, allowing himself to be surrounded by the music.
Fursonalized, Chapter 2 - A Whole New World
As before, critiques are welcomed. this is the last bit of the valentine's day gift section of the story.
Wasteland Survivor – Reasons - ch3
By the end of the week we had assembled some fifty or more of the damn things and carried them around to various soldiers to have them disassemble them, critique our work, then hand them back to use to assemble again.
Waiting On The Storm - Thursday Writing Prompt
critiques are always welcome. i also write a story blog about a guy living with a werewolf. check that out too if you think that's something you'd enjoy. https://lifewithawerewolf.blogspot.com/ thank you, and i hope you enjoy.
Blackfoot - Pathfinder Custom Race
As always, if you see any critiques to be made, be sure to let me know. and if you play as one of them, tell me how it goes! what class did you play? what feats did you take? how well did the race perform? i'd love to hear about it.
The Lead Crown: Ch 9.5b, Shock and Awe
Comments, questions, quandaries, critiques, and input is always appreciated. thanks for reading! tranquil waters: the lead crown ch 9.5, shock and awe tobias had visited the newport cathedral often in his youth at the behest of his father.