A Night's Work
No, I don't plan on writing anything like this anytime soon. The reason why? I got part of this stuck in my head, I'll tell you what at the end, and I had to get it out, it was both annoying and a little disturbing. Since I'm always up for getting...
Life Among the Stars: Intro
Have you ever looked up at the stars and wondered what might be out there? Yeah, me neither. Maybe if I had I'd be having a better time right now. I guess I should give my name and where I'm from, it looks like I'll be here a while. My name's Ynali...
Chapter 1: A Strange Discovery and A New Beginning
Hey guys, this is my first story but pretty much whatever criticism you throw at me I can take. Only thing about it is please nothing like "you suck" and nothing else. However if you were to say "you suck because...." that would be fine with me. Anyway...
Chapter 2: The Decision Made, The Change Completed, and The Teacher Found
Hey guys, this came earlier than I thought. I guess I'm kind of addicted to writing (weird huh?).Anyway feel free to comment and critic. Edit: Found a word missing, put it there. Pronunciation Krynn (like it looks, rhymes with 'in') Caramon (Car a...
Chapter 16: Resurrection
Here's your chapter, my readers. All I needed was a day with some free time. ^\_^ Hopefully, you'll enjoy this, and I guarantee you'll cringe if you liked the last chapter a...
Chapter 12: Rohan Gets a Big Surprise
Sorry about taking longer than I said, but I am an expert procrastinator. That, plus I had ton of work dumped on me. Anyway, here it is. This is by far the longest chapter yet. Feel free to comment or critic as usual. Rohan and Kitara awoke the next...
Chapter 4: The Beginning of A Journey and A Surprise Meeting
Sorry this took longer, it got deleted and I had to rewrite it. \*Groans\* Anyway blah comment blah blah critic, you know the drill. The wolves looked at each other, one of them walked off into the cave. "Thanks." said Rohan, sitting down to wait....
Chapter 5: The Trail is Followed and A New Teacher is Found
Hey, fastest one yet. Hopefully it didn't suffer because of it. Comment and critic at will. Also, I know some of the reader's are waiting and the story will spice up a bit in the future. I promise. Rohan awoke in the early morning. He wondered what to...
Chapter 13: A Trip To The Village
Boy, it's been a while, huh? Sorry about that, dunno what happened. Yes, I know I said I'd have it up a couple weeks ago, but I had to leave for a vacation before I got done and lost all my momentum on it. Why didn't I write while I was there? Hm... A...
Chapter 7: Rohan Meets Ryutai and The Training Begins
Hey, now you get to meet Ryutai. This took longer because I had stuff to do, I still do, so the next one probably won't be in a day. Anyway, comment or critic at will, for an example check Chapter 1's comments. Also I can think of at least four...
Chapter 3: The Past Unveiled and The Training Completed
Next installment's here! Hope you enjoy this chapter too. Feel free to comment or critic. Pronunciation Tanis (Tan-iss) Ryutai (Rye-you-tay) Rohan looked over at Tanis, after picking his jaw up from the ground he managed to stammer, "You're going...
Chapter 11: Krynn’s Advice and Rohan’s New Home
Sorry about taking forever. This one's a little short, since it's mostly about story progression, but I hope you guys like it anyway. Sorry again about letting you guys down. Krynn led Rohan out of the cave and into a secluded glade, Kitara followed...