All's Fair - Part 22
**Part 22** A slight, cold breeze off of the sea ruffled my fur as I sat quietly in the leaves at the small cemetery, knees pulled up to my chest. It smelled like another storm would be rolling in tonight. Summer had ended quite abruptly at the end...
All's Fair - Part 19b
1. I guess I should quit trying to make promises about when I'll post, because it doesn't work at all. I sincerely apologize. Also, thank you so much to everyone who's stuck with me thus far; you've been wonderful. 2. I've retouched Part 19a. You...
All's Fair - Part 1
Foreword This is my first novel. I'd like to note that a lot of things change later on in the story because I didn't plan this all out in advance and that there are a lot of plot holes (stuff like how 'insane' my protagonist is - he started...
All's Fair - Part 15
I hope you all enjoy reading this. By all means, please comment and critique; I love feedback. Nick is bisexual, and the story has some homosexual content. Don't read if that bothers you etc. Thanks! - Xi EDIT: Thanks to [Tank...
All's Fair - Part 12
I hope you all enjoy. By all means, please comment; I love feedback. Nick is bisexual, and the story has some homosexual content. Don't read if that bothers you etc. Thanks! - Xi **All's Fair - Part 12** The icy sidewalk...
All's Fair - Part 8
I'm really really sorry I took so long on this one; I had other things going on, plus a nasty case of writer's block on all things related to All's Fair. I'd like to thank [Combustion](%5C) for his last comment, because that's what started me sparking...
All's Fair - Part 7
The story's main character is bi, so don't read if you don't want to. As ever, your thoughts and criticism are welcome so that I can get better. Are things moving too slow? Do I have enough detail? Are the characters fun and/or believable?...
All's Fair - Part 6
The story's main character is bi, so don't read if you don't want to. As ever, your thoughts and criticism are welcome so that I can get better. Is it believable? Did something in my writing style bug you? Should I have more/less of...
All's Fair - Part 5
The story's main character is bi, so don't read if you don't want to. As ever, your thoughts and criticism are welcome so that I can get better. Thanks for reading! - Xi **All's Fair - Part 5** I got a little loaf of bread and a thick slice of ham...
All's Fair - Part 4
The story's main character is bi, so don't read if you don't want to. As ever, your thoughts and criticism are welcome so that I can get better. Thanks for reading! - Xi **All's Fair - Part 4** The trick was to get off campus without being seen,...
All's Fair - Part 3
The story's main character is bi, so don't read if you don't want to. As ever, your thoughts and criticism are welcome so that I can get better. Thanks for reading! - Xi **All's Fair - Part 3** Fridays should be banned. Everyone...
All's Fair - Part 2
This story contains homo/bisexuality (implied more than explicit) and violence, so consider yourself warned. I know this needs work. Please comment with your thoughts and especially constructive criticism so that I can keep improving my...