Psychocalypse - Phrenic Intro
_Is that thunder?_ Nothing but darkness. And cold? No, sweat. _It sounds like... a landslide. I can't see anything! And... and I can't move!_ No amount of mental struggling seemed to properly translate into motion. Even with the mind afire with...
Writing Tips vol. 2
third person perspective comes in degrees, as to how much knowledge they have, but generally they only know the thoughts of the current viewpoint character, and the observable actions and words of others.
Xavier's Changing
He resembled, from a third person perspective, a very tall jock. not over the top on muscle, but enough to make star quarterback. he rushed upstairs, feeling much more energetic than before, and so much more than he used to.
A brother's love
This is a particularly dark scene i've had on my mind for a while, yes it is pretty... different to what most of you would read, but i mostly did this to work on writing in the third person perspective.
What's the Measure of a Man? I Don't Know But My Tail is Three Feet Long
Not the least of which was switching into the third-person perspective. it may not seem like much, but writing 'he said' and 'johnathan did' drove me crazy for the first week or so.
The Guardians Shadow Pt2 Ch3
I had a bit of a difficult time typing this out as i switched from third person perspective back to first person.
"BLEU" - Thingy
That's when i regained my real existing personality, and moved into a third person perspective. my alternate identity turned and walked away as a dark and blood-stained figure, as the dream slowly faded.
Chapter Sixteen: Secret Reminders
:p (a/n: this chapter is from a third-person perspective. usual 'in-head' approach continues next chapter.) she stared at the note with bemusement the only remaining response.
Central City Trilogy: Wishes - chapter 3 The Utilitarian’s Moral Obligation - 3.7
The surroundings blurred, as if viewed through a detached, third-person perspective. “ivan’s hands are strong; they always make me feel safe.” who had said that to me? i can’t quite remember.
The Railroad - Journey - 4.3
After that, it was like i was watching everything from a third-person perspective, with no sense of reality at all. thanks to our well-prepared plan, we passed through the territorial checkpoint without any difficulties.
Sinori's Story - Chapter Three
. ;_; i couldn't think of a clear way to explain it in-story, but the after-chapter segment at the end, where everything flips to third person perspective, is not being told by older sinori to younger sinori. it's just a peek only you readers get.
Aeria
"that allows you to give you a third person perspective of what is going on through my eyes. i am not real and an ai program, but i have hacked the companies' software of the game and added that button to your hud."