Quickie Freestyle Two: Use the Senses

Story by okariblackblood on SoFurry

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#2 of poems and written work

i just came up with this like a few minutes ago, and i decided to share it. This time i drew inspiration on Velvet Remedy and Little Pip from the original Fallout: Equestria Series, by KKat.


i wish you could see

how much you mean to me

i know you can feel it

but can you hear it? can you see it?

how much it pains me

how much i insanely try to do differently for you

you'd think im a nice guy, but im not

you'd think its simple but i rot

inside

im crushed, oh my. how could i?

how could we? could you please?

you seem to be, my only remedy

soft to the touch, my velvet remedy

i guess ill try, ill shoot from the hip

what you need is a little pip

to move you along, to the end of the song,

from the sky to the moon, i guess ill be ending soon,

but before i do, ill say, i love you.

Quickie Freestyle One: How do I deal with it all?

it's too good to be true Is this love? Who knew How we would go through with our plans Erase the barrier in the sand And come forth to embrace the things we can't deal with Or have yet to feel it Out We're about To hold hands ...

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