Team Smartz Ch.1 - Lucky Penny
#1 of The Chronicles of Team Smartz
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Yes, This is mah first ever fanfic, it's for Pokemon Mystery Dungeon 2!! This is also my first ever story that I've written outside of school projects ... Comments & Critiques are appreciated (I WANT REAL, CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM DAMMIT!) please enjoy the story ... ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Team Smartz Chapter 1: Lucky Penny . . . pitch dark everywhere ... a voice cries out "We're almost there!" ..... "Slipping ... can't hold on ........." .... "Hello? ... are you okay?" a spunky looking Pikachu asked as I opened my eyes. "Man, you had me worried there dude, what are you doing here?" "Hey, how are you talking? You're a Pikachu..." "How observant of you, and how is a talking Pikachu any weirder than a talking Skitty?" the Pikachu inquired. "Well, it isn't any weirder, I would be just as surprised to see a talking Skitty as I would a talking Pikachu." "Well than you must not look at yourself very often, which is pretty unusual for a Skitty." "What are you talking about? I'm not a Skitty, I'm a human." "If you are a human than I'm Grandmaster Wiggleytuff!" "Well, nice to meetcha Wiggleytuff!" I said as I extended my hand ... rather, my paw for a sarcastic hand shake, "What the fudge?!" I asked as I noticed my changed appearance, "HOLY CRAP!! I'VE BEEN TRANSFORMED INTO A SKITTY?!" "Uhhh ... are you okay, Skitty??" "Okay?! OKAY!? I am the exact OPPOSITE of OKAY!! I've been changed into a SKITTY!!" "Yeaah ... well, do you have a name? "My name?" I thought as I tried to remember... "Yah, my names Penny." "Penny huh? ..." I heard him trying not to burst out laughing, "HAHAHAHA!! That's a funny thing to name a Skitty!" He fell over laughing, trying to breathe, "*sigh* Well, It's nice to meetcha Penny, my name's Antwon!" He said with a wink. "What are you doing out here on the beach anyways Penny?" "Hmm, that's a good question ..." I said as I tried to think of my whereabouts prior to laying unconscious on a beach. "I can't seem to remember anything except my name ..." "Huh, that's weird ... Ouch!" Antwon exclaimed as he was knocked off his hind-paws and onto the sandy ground. "ANTWON! Are you okay?!" I asked as I went to make sure he wasn't seriously injured. "Oh, I would like to apologize, that is, I WOULD if I gave two magicarp about you, squirt!" said an evil looking Sneasel standing next to a sinister Meowth, "Oh and, by the way, I shall be taking THAT!" She said as she grabbed a rock with a strange symbol on it that Antwon had dropped. "HEY! You can't take that! It's my personal treasure!" "And what exactly are YOU going to do about it squirt!?" the Meowth asked as they zipped off into a nearby cave. "Aww man, that Relic Fragment is my own, personal, irreplaceable treasure ... and that no good Sneasel took it into Beach Cave! ... I'll never get it back now!" (Man, Antwon sure does look depressed about loosing his rock thing ... I should help him get it back) "Hey, Antwon! Are you gonna let those thugs get away with stealing YOUR personal treasure?!" "What else can I do? I can't beat those two by myself!" he explained "I'll tell you what ... I'll help you get back your Relic Fragment if you try and help me figure out why I got changed into a pokemon and got my memory erased ... deal?" "Okay, I guess I can do that, they looked like they were headed for Beach Cave, that's right over there." He said as he pointed towards a cave on the side of the beach. "Well, then ... OFF TO BEACH CAVE!!" End of Chapter One ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- YAH! I know what y'all are thinking ... "HOLEH CRAP that was the SHORTEST EFFING THING I'VE EVER READ!!" Yah well, guess what, it is one of the shortest things possible to read on this whole website. Don't get your feathers in a bunch ... my later chapters will be longer ... Yah, and apparently this web site requires that you type at least five thousand characters in the story so I need to take this space to say that I will try to update my story every Saturday ... or at least it will update ON Saturdays ... ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------