Darkened Dawn: Part 1/3: Revolt To Revoria: Chapter 3: Kidnapping Kiddo
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"Ergh, hey! Let me out!" I was still in the bag, when I didn't know Alice. "No," she said. "You'll come out when I let you out." I was wriggling in the bag, acting like a wild Mankey. Finally, Alice let me out, but when I went out, it looked dark, and I saw a huge star-shaped figure in the sky. "Paradox," Alice had said. "They're back." I thought about what she had said. What did she mean, they're back? I was interrupted of my thoughts from a voice. "Lopunny! Lopun!" Lopunny pointed to the figure, now in the shape of a finger pointing at us. "Call me Alice. Meet me at Sunnyside Central Hotel tomorrow." She handed me a piece of paper with her number: 1-646-837-5928. Then, I knew the real trouble was about to begin.