The Demon in the dark before the Angel in the light (ch 3-4)
3 and 4 chapter to the first ones these are longer by about 400 words haha ya just tell me what you think after you read
*Chapter3 * Alice: She was beautiful, she became like a mother to me almost instantly as i arrived home she though i was a lost child looking for his parents and some how i had wondered to my family front door. She didn't know of anything about fathers dark side his true being she only knew what she had seen a sweet funny loving man, but truely he was a evil evil man with a false sence of loving kindness that she had fallen for. father told her who i was and she was happy that i would be staying at home she would have someone to help her raise my "brother" Dien besides my "sister" Eve but i liked them both and father explained to me that i was only five not ten. The Laboratory was in the human world so time went by faster i was amazed and Alice babied me even though i had the body of a ten year old boy but i didn't complain it was nice to be held and read to and fed instead of being poked and prodded by needles and pins. It was nice to feel loved by at least one person because Alice was the only one that cared father said i was to weak he beat me and broke me but i healed faster each time he forced me to fight and when i could no longer Alice was their to stop him from letting me be killed. She was my guardian angel my hope dien was weaker compared to me sister was a strong as me or a little weaker. One day Alice took me on a picnic to a giant field full of butterflies and very pretty flowers we ate our lunch and sat down and watched the sky. she asked me why did i not fight back and i answered. If i fought back i would not bruise or break him i would kill and after one i can not stop i would show the monstor in me and you would hate me. Alice began to sniffle and cry as she hugged me and we turned to the field as we heard laughter and lots of it there was ten atleast maybe a couple more or less they were bigmen in shitty clothing and they had tools in there hands tools used to hurt people they had knifes, bats, hammers, and they laughed and two stood out i had seen them before short plump men twins to be exact. Humpty & Dumpty they were friends of father they wanted me and they wanted to hurt Alice i could tell.
chang Chapter 4: First encounter with death: I growled as they walked closer and they laughed at me. They told Alice to give me to them and they would let the men have there way with her and then they would make it long and painful. I growled lower as i lept from Alice's arm and charged one as a bat smashed into the side of my head and i screamed louder and more painfully then ever before as i felt my skull give in and shatter as i felt flesh and bone rip away as they pulled the bat from my skull as i fell to the ground. I... I... I was dying I was dead, but in those final moments i felt a spark of a deep burning blue flame it ignited in the very depths of me as i heard Alice scream. I was alive I lept from the ground with the blue flame in my eyes and i killed the one who hit me instantly i slammed my arm completely through him and i laughed as i slayed several more. Humpty & Dumpty watched in suspense as i dodged knife blades and bats and killed them several i fried there minds over powering their thoughts with their own deaths i watched and licked my lips as one slit his own throat. the rest ran away as fast as they could as i collapsed and panted and a pool of blood filled the dip in the ground i landed in and i cried for Alice i cried and whimpered. She stood by me and fell to her knee's as i cried and my skull was shattered a huge gap in it and i cried more in pain and she told me to stay calm. How how in the gods was i to stay calm when my skull was shattered all over this part of the field when im laying in a puddle of my own blood and i tired my best. I felt a warm embrace fall over me as i fell asleep instantly and i awoke several months later to Alice changing my bandages i didn't realize it at the time but i had several knifes stuck in my chest i was only paying attention to my skull. She healed me took care of me and father left me for dead. Now i know who my enemy is.