A Forest Nightmare
#1 of adventure
my first attempt at a story so any advice would be great. its about a boy who is the only known surviver of a plane crash after he flew through the bermuda triangle. he crashed in an endless jungle full of dangers,the boy tries to escape this Nightmare and his past.
"Hello!"echoed Kane's voice through the dark damp forest.The ground had little vegetation.A thick mist radiating off the forest floor. The trees loomed over him, trapping him. Kane was scared and alone. He heard a growl in the distance."What was that?" Gasped Kane. His heart was pounding in his cheast. His dark green shirt drenched with sweat as was his dark brown hair. His jeens were covered in mud. He was missing one of his black trainers, his left one. You could tell he wasn't local as his skin was a pale white. His eyes the same dark brown as his hair, looked frantically for something to defend himself with.he spots his pocket knife. "Think God, must have landed with me."Exclaims Kane. As he ventures towards it he hears something rustle in the bush next to him. He jjumps back from sheer fear falling over a branch hitting his head on a log knocking him out cold.