My frozen soul saved with love : part one

Story by kaisif17 on SoFurry

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#1 of frozen soul series

hey guys i'm new at this writing thing so i'd love some tips for future story writing hope the story is ok i want it to become good


It was a Saturday morning as Kaisif was lying in his bed like a robot that was switched off. Light begins to move through his bedroom shades and begins to shine upon his face.

"Jeez stupid sunlight,"

I woke up in the middle of my bed and looked around my room only to see usually thing that I kept in here like a kendo sword, laptop and work desk, and a few other things that made his room seem usual to the average teenager.

"welp time to get ready"

I walk over to the bathroom and begin to look into the mirror seeing my reflection. I am a german shepard with blue eyes and black hair. I am 5' foot 6 and I have a normal build nothing to flashy.

I stop staring at myself in the mirror looking like a psycho and began to undress and started the shower up.

As soon as I begin to get into the shower hot water splashes my fur and I begin move back quickly

"I hate when the water gets this hot"

The shower begins to remind me of all the pain I've gone through as a pup when I was younger. I was a very quiet kid and did almost everything I was told to do and most people hated that from me in school. They would call me "kiss up " or "teacher's pet" and I hated hearing all those remarks even though most of them weren't true.

Now I am sixteen and I go to Central Academy High School and the torment wasn't stopping there either. People there hated me because I was different always the standout of the group not afraid of being who I am. Most of the ridicule is because I'm attracted to my own gender and almost everyone at school knows it even though I have said nothing about my sexuality to anyone I know.

I begin to awake from my bad thoughts and finished washing up and walked out the shower to brush my teeth and to get dressed for school.

My usual school attire was very different I from everyone else's because I usually choose two colors and roll dice to choose what outfit to wear.

"For today lets go with blue and black"

I grab my lucky pair of dice and roll them across the floor and they landed on a 1 and 6.

"Yay today I get to wear black jeans with a blue cut off shirt with black and blue flattops"

I begin to run downstairs running past my mom and dad while they were chatting it up like usual.

I begin to walk to school at my usual pace until I'm tackled by a unexpected fox.

"jeez kurter, learn how to say hello instead of tackling people"

Kurter looks up"sorry you know how I am just bursting with spirit"

Kurter is a artic fox with nothing but spirit to keep him going he's 5 foot 6 like me but he has green eyes. He is my best friend and is the only person in the school who I could trust with my secret even though he was totally confused by me telling him.

"So race you to school, huh Kaisif"

I nod "sure why not you need to be beaten"

Me and Kurter take our positions as I begin counting down"3..2..1 GO!"

We both ran off to school and ended up doing a little extra jumps on the way.

Five minutes later we both end up finishing with a tie. "jeez Kaisif when did you get so fast"

"Its called a weekend run you should try it..." suddenly my head begin to ache with tremendous pain

"Argh ,what they hell is wrong with my brain" I fell to the ground while Kurter stood there in terror unknowing what to do"Kaisif are you ok here, I'll go get some help" Kurter then dashes off into the school while he is screaming "help over and over again"

My head was still feeling like it had gone through a meat slicer and blow up to tiny bits."Crap this hurts freaking bad why is...." I pass out from the pain.

In my unconscious I begin to dream and see a black figure standing there in front of me. "Welcome Kaisif finally you have arrived"

"Who the hell are you!" I shout back.

Why I am just a humble spirit here with a few things to say to you nothing more nothing less.

"well get to talking stranger"

Ok ok.. Suddenly the stranger begins to pull out a black pendant. "this is the oblivion vatic pendant and it has the power to help its wearer to see into the future but it comes with a catch"

"So" I say "what's the catch"

"The catch is that if you fail to find someone who loves you for being who you are and what you've become when you wear the pendant you'll will use your power to destroy the world"

"But why me there are other people who could be a candidate for your crazy charm, so why did you chose me" I reply looking scared from what I just heard.

"we chose you because it is our choice we are the ones who decide if the world should die or not" he states. "oh, by the way the deadline for the pendants unbridled powers is a month so I hope your good with people who will want to fail in love with you or it's good bye Earth"

"Who the hell.." I was cut off by the astral being.

"we are everything but also nothing that's for us to worry about not you, now go run along with your new power and prove how worthy you are to use it"

10 minutes has passed and Kurter and two other furs are staring down at me with confused looks" I look at kurter and say "who are they"

"these two are from the football team. The bull is Aaron and the husky is Dante" he says, but my eyes are focused on Dante.

"Hey are you ok me and my buddy were going to carry you to the nurse's office until you woke up."

I sigh and look down at the school pavement remembering what the spirit said to me as it rang into my head"

"Hey Kaisif where did you get this pendant I've never seen you with it" Kurter asks.

I look down and see the pendant the spirit gave me, it was black and white and it looked like a shooting star with a skull on top of it

I look up into the sky "So I guess he wasn't a dream after all.