Boltasar - chapter 1 - A Day to Remember

Story by Boltasar on SoFurry

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4 months and I managed to add 1 paragraph =_(

I am very sorry for the ULTRA slowness.

and also, very sorry for the shortness

I still hope you guys will like the read.

DO give feedback I can really use it.

Some notes. " is spoken (DUH) ** are Bolt's thoughts, -- are Criss' thoughts.

I do NOT own Pokemon.

ps: I cant manage to put pictures in the story, I thought I could before... (or that is just me being silly)


"Oh come on Bolt, let's battle already." The Eevee tried to use her Puppy Eyes, she wasn't very good at it though.

Boltasar tilted his head, sleepily looking at the girl. "Again? I just beat you half a minute ago, how about a rest for once?"

The girl stood up and started to circle around Boltasar. "Scared I'll kick your butt?"

Boltasar sighed. "Of Course not, I just don't want to hurt you even more." Putting his chin on the ground again.

The Eevee rolled over on her back. "Gah, you're no fun Bolt."

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Hi, I'm Boltasar, I'm kind of a special Eevee. I look just like any other Eevee, except for two bolts, one on every ear. For strangers it would just look like some kind of scar, but those who know me know it means more. I am somehow not just a normal type like all other Eevees, instead I am normal electric. No one knows why, my father is a Jolteon and my mother a Vaporeon, nothing special at all. Some say I am some kind of Messiah, others just blame mutation. All I know is that I just want to be treated like any other pokémon.

The other Eevee is Criss. She has Ice-Blue eyes and always seems to be a slight bit hyperactive. She isn't special like me at all. Well, maybe she is. After all she is the only classmate who doesn't treat me like I'm a monster.

We go to the same class and soon will both attend the final exam. During the final exam an Eevee chooses its profession, its evolution.

I believe Criss has made up her mind already, Glaceon, definitely Glaceon. The days of my advantage are over, I guess.

I on the other hand am not sure what to become at all, mostly because I never really pay attention in class. I always sit in some spot far from the teacher and other classmates. Trying to stay out of trouble. Those bolts are some kind of trouble magnets. Everyone in my class wants to worsen my life in some way or another. Some may think I am dumb, but I'm not. I am actually very intelligent, just never learned much.

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"Say, Bolt, the exam is pretty close, isn't it? Have you decided what you gonna be?" Criss asked the pile of fur that lay next to her.

"Hmm, you said something, Criss?" Boltasar mumbled.

"Do you ever like, not sleep, Bolt?" Criss jumped up, starting to circle around Boltasar again.

"I believe so, when I am eating or when I am fighting you." Boltasar put on a devious grin.

Criss jumped at Boltasar with a very angry look on her face. "Why are you never serious. I am trying to talk with you."

"Well I am sorry MISS, but this conversation is over, school is starting soon." And while he said this he stood up and started walking towards the village.

"Umm, Bolt, we have no school today."

"Oh right, today is one of those training days, right? So, the day after there will be another test." Boltasar stood up. "Alright Criss let's battle."

*Maybe after this she will stop bothering me.*

And as if she could she the future Criss ran towards Boltasar before he even finished the sentence. Boltasar quickly slid his paw over the ground. Criss got a big cloud of sand in her face.

"You're gonna need more than that, MISS." And now Boltasar ran towards Criss.

As Boltasar expected Criss tried to counter the same way, but before he was within the range of a sand-attack he jumped and took her down. He did however trip while landing, giving Criss the opportunity to retaliate with a tackle.

Boltasar got up and dashed towards Criss.

*The air sure is dry today.*

He got close enough and was about to use a quick attack, but suddenly he felt a spark. Before he knew it electricity was all over his body.

Boltasar crashed straight into Criss. The knockback was much stronger than Take down.

"Ugh, Criss, what happened?" Boltasar looked around, a little to his left lay Criss. Sparks could be seen jumping in her fur. "CRISS!" Boltasar ran towards the eevee.

She was almost knocked out, paralyzed and breathing heavily. Bolt picked her up.

*Damn she is heavy.*

He started walking towards the village.

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Criss opened her eyes. She saw some lights and moving shadows. Laughter could be heard.

"Ugh" She moaned.

"Oh, you are finally awake. We were worried you would sleep all week. But two days is good"

Criss finally adjusted to the light. She could see Bolt, a Vaporeon and her mother.

"So, do you recall what happened Criss?" Her mother continued.

"Boltasar said you two were battling and he somehow used an attack he had never seen before." The Vaporeon joined the conversation. Criss realized she was Bolt's mother.

"I remember we were battling yes. Bolt was running towards me, suddenly I saw a flash and then everything went black." Criss tried to sit, but failed miserably.

"You got to stay down dear. You are still weak." Her mother pushed her down again.

Criss sighed. "How... long... have I been asleep?"

"That would be about... a day and a half." Her mother answered.

"Boltasar certainly pulled off a powerful Volt tackle. I would never have guessed he would be able to use it, even Jolteons can't. What am I saying, only Pichus get born with it." Criss looked at the Vaporeon, a proud smile was vaguely present.

-Just another example of mothership. Not caring about the devastating effects it could have had, as long as it is their child who pulled off something incredible.-

Criss looked around, she couldn't find Bolt anywhere. "Speaking of Bolt, where did he go?"

The Vaporeon also looked around. "I guess he still feels very bad about the whole accident."

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