Hurt, Trails and True Love
I am re-doing this story as I have not been on for ages
This is the first part of my new story, and first one, that I am writing. It is not going to be choc full of sex but there will be some and there will even be rape but that comes later on.
As this is my first story I ask that you don't be too harsh on me but I do take productive critism.
Now for the character refernces in this part of the story.
Skye - Skye is a female, silver clouded leopard with vivid ice blue eyes and ivory black hair. She is tall and lithe, with long legs built for running.
Hannah - Hannah is a beautiful Arabian paint horse who is white with dark brown dapple. She has brown hair and chocolate brown eyes. She is a bit of a slut.
Kael - Kael is a black male grey wolf whose eyes are brown. He is extremely tall.
Oliver - Oliver is a male jaguar whose eyes are a stunning brown. His fur is golden brown with black spots. His hair is fluffy, being a really light blonde. It has curls as well. He is well toned with a great body. He's a swimmer and soccor player. He is also really good a piano.
Teagan - Teagan is a vixen with blue eyes and a white underbelly. She has long blonde hair.
Skye's room was dark and quiet when her phone alarm went of telling her to get up. Grumbling she rolled over and went to grab her phone and missed. With a sigh she propped herself up on her elbow and picked up her phone of the T.V. cabinet and turned her alarm off. It was 6am in the morning and the sun had not even appeared yet. It was still dark! She hated how she had to wake up so early to go to school but she had to. She had made it into a selective high school and not many others could do that. Throwing the covers off she jumped out of her bed and ran into the shower, grabbing a towel of of the cupboard as she went by it. Since it was Winter she always hurried to get the warm water running. Staying in the shower for halk an hour like she usually did, Skye got out at around 6:30am and got into her school clothes. by the time she was ready it was around 6:40 so she knocked on her mothers door. Now to get to school Skye would have to get her mum to drive her to the train station. there she would catch a train for an hour, then finally she would walk for another 10 minutes. All in all it took her an hour and a half to get to school. before she left home she checked herself in the mirror to make sure everything was in order. Skye was a silver clouded leopard with ivory black hair and ice blye eyes that stood out. She smiled at her reflection. She may not of been pretty but she liked herself just the way she was. Smoothing a part in her blue school jumper, Skye grabbed her bag and got into the car.
Sitting on the train, Skye was reading a book when he friend Hannah got on. Skye put her book away and smiled at Hannah as she sat down, Hannah was a beautiful Arabian paint horse. She was white with dark brown dapple covering her body. Hannah also had lovely chocolate brown eyes. "So are you excited about today?" Hannah asked skye, a gleam in her eyes. Skye had no idea what Hannah was talking about and she tilted her head slightly, trying to think about what she would be excited about. "I have no idea what you're talking about Hannah." She said after thinking for a short while. Hannah laughed at her and shook her head slightly. "Trust you to forget an important occasion. Our class is going to the movies today remember. We're going to see that new Shakespeare movie. I thought you loved Shakespeare." Skye then remembered about it and laughed to herself. she was always forgetting things like that. "I remember now. Luckily I got paid yesterday so I can by some snacks at the snack bar. I can't wait to see the new adaption of A Midsomers Night Dream." Hannah rolled her eyes at her best friend. She could be such a geek sometimes.
They continued to chat, their conversations turning random at some points. That was what they were. Random, geeky, loveable and strange but that's how they liked it. Walking into the school gate they saw that their friend Kael had just got to school as well and they both crept up on him and hugged him. Of course Kael knew who it was straight away because Skye and Hannah hugged everyone.Kael smiled his wolfish smile at them both. "One day you two are going to hug someone and kill them I swear." He said to them with a slight chuckle. Sitting down at "The Table" they all started talking about what they were doing today and what eachother had done on the holidays. As usual Hannah talked about herself... A lot. this was the one thing that bothered Skye about Hannah. Well it wasn't the only thing. There was a couple of other facts that bothered her but she kept them all to herself. Hannah was her best friend and she wasn't going to stop being her friend just because of a few minor faults.
The bell went loud and clear, signalling that it was time for everyone to go to rolecall.Hannah, Kael and Skye were all in the same class so they went together, hannah and Kael talking while Skye just walked silently. Reaching their room they found that the teacher was late to arrive again so they waited with the rest of the class outside. "Will Mr G ever get here on time." Skye said with a laugh. their rolecall teacher was always late. Sometimes he never even showed up. "Who knows... Oh look Skye. Olly's here." Hannah said, nudging her friend and pointing to the light brown, practically golden brown,jaguar that had just turned the coner and joined the class outside. Skye looked over at him then quickly looked back at Hannah. "He's got a girlfriend remember!" Skye told her quietly, eyes flashing with some emotion that was too quick for Hannah to catch. "I know that, but you two seem close. I mean you practically hang out all of your music lessons so I've been told." Skye sighed and nodded at Hannahs' words. "that doesn't mean that he likes me. He's just being friendly and teaching me some piano." Skye had a crush on Oliver but it wasn't always like this. When he first came to the school Skye dispised him with a passion for no reason at all. She had later learnt that she hated him because she knew he was going to become one of those popular guys who would treat girls like her as filth. But she was wrong. Oliver turned out to be a nice, quiet guy who was pleasent to be around, once you got him actually talking to you.
Finally their teacher arrived and marked the role quickly just before the bell went. Skye looked over at Oliver to see that he was upset about something. worry pierced through her heart and she walked faster to come up beside him. "Hey Olly!' She said cheerfully with a bright smile. Oliver looked at her and waved his hand in the cute way that he usually would. It was cute because it looked shy. "Are you alright? You seem kinda down." She said trying to figure out what the matter was. Oliver looked at her. sadness definatly in his brown eyes. "I broke up with Teagan this morning." He told her. Skye automatically pulled him in for a hug and for the first time, he actually hugged her back properly. "Do you want to talk about it?" Skye asked , eyes worried for her friend, and the guy she liked. Oliver nodded slowly and looked at the other people around. "Can we sit away from others? I don't want anyone else over-hearing." He asked her and Skye nodded immediatly, leading him away from prying eyes. "Now talk to me."
So please leave your comments and tell me how I went. Thank you.