A random story
Before you read i just wanted to let everyone know that this is my first story. i would appreciate feedback. i know this story wont be the best and since im not much of a writer, there might be some parts with bad grammer or bad spelling, i have already read it my self and two other of my friends have also read it but they found no problems with it. also please tell me any tips for writing.
i also would like to say that one of my friends that got me into writing a story his name is jons133wolf and his stoies inspired me to write one of mine.
this story is pretty sad and i do apologize if i made you cry :3
i dont really have a title for this story. so yeah.....
lastly i made this for fun, i was bored and i wanted to do something... lol
thanks. ~~~Tempest~~~
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The year is 2019; the war on terror has not yet ended, what's left to do here?
---Six months later----
"MAIL CALL!" The General yelled, every one gathered at the table where the mail sack was, and Tempest was the last one to get there. (Tempest is a black wolf with tattoos on his back, chest and his left for Arm. his right eye is grey and his left eye is green, waring military clothing) He looks through all the letters and one catches his attention. The letter appears to be old and worn out the wearing is faint but still readable. In the front of the letter it has Tempest's name on it. He takes it and goes to his bunk bed, he opens it and it says....
Hey Tempest, I miss you sooooooooooo much I can't wait till u get back, I have the something awesome to show you, I know you'll love it. And when you get back we'll spend the night at the beach watching the moon. Anyway I hope you come back soon, baby I love you.
--Ivory-
Tempest's eyes start getting watery, he grins and in a soft voice he says "I love you too Ivory" he puts the letter back in the envelope, he then starts to wonder how old can this letter be. He lies down on his bed and starts to think. Suddenly Second lieutenant Revflames says "Tempest I found your dog tags." with a serious attitude "You're not supposed to just leave it around everywhere" said Revflames. "Sorry man, I didn't even notice I took it off" said Tempest embraced, after Revflames gave the dog tags to Tempest. Tempest stared at the dog tags as if he was daydreaming and it says "There are no arms to hold you, and yet there are no hands to wipe your tears away." Then Tempest puts it back on.
"FIRST LIEUTENANT TEMPEST AND SECOND LIEUTENANT FLAMES GET YOUR ASSES TO MY OFFECE" said the General, Tempest and Revflames make their way to the General's office. Once There the General said. "Do you boys know why I called you down here?"Tempest and Revflames looked at each other and at the same time said no. "You both are being recalled" "really?" said Revflames "When do we leave sir?" said Tempest "in two days, soldier" said The General. A soldier burst through the doors of the Generals office "SIR WHERE UNDER ATTACK!!!!" "WHAT?!" "ENEMY TROOPS ARE COMING FROM THE NORTHEAST SIDE!" said the soldier.
Tempest was worried about what was going to happen, he was afraid of death but he knew that he didn't sign up for the marines for nothing. Him and Revflames quickly geared up and were ready for battle. (Tempest was one of the tallest Canines in the squad standing at 6'5 it was hard for anyone to take him down. He could even duel wield an M249 if he wanted to). Tempest begins to give his squad members some covering fire with his ACR. "Why the hell would the enemy just attack us like this?" Said soldier 1. "No clue they might want our ammo and supplies" said soldier 2. "Still, whatever they want they can't have" said Tempest. The second squad where Revflames was, were pinned down and needed backup so, Tempest ran for cover to Revflames, and whilst running over he was shot 6 times. Tempest is now on the floor loosing blood. "No I---I can't die here.... I... I... need to live... please...I feel so cold right now... and yet.... the sand feels so warm. Is it really my time? Is it too late to repent? One last breath of life please...." Tempest takes one long deep breath in and then releases. As soon as the battle started it was over Revflames ran over to help Tempest, he fears that Tempest might be dead."TEMPEST?! WAKE UP MAN!" But Tempest didn't respond. Was his best friend gone? Revflames helped the medics carry him to the helicopter and take him to the hospital. "What hospital are we going to?" Said Revflames. "New York is the closest city, he has a better chance to live, but it's still low with all the blood he lost." Said the pilot. After landing at JC Memorial hospital, Tempest was rushed to the emergency room and had to undergo surgery he was in critical condition. After the surgery Revflames asked the doctor "how is he? Will he make it?" the doctors' response was "I'm not sure he's in a coma and he's still pretty bad. His chances of living are pretty low."
---Three days later---
"Ow, My arm. AHH WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED TO MY ARM?!?" and where the hell am I?" said Tempest all confused. Tempest looks around to try to make out where he is. He's still a little dizzy after just waking up out of a coma. He finds himself in a hospital. The doctor walks in, "MY GOD, IT'S A MIRACLE "said the doctor. "What happened?" said Tempest "you were in a coma for three days. You were shot twice in the right arm, three times in the right leg and once in the stomach.... but sadly we couldn't remove one bullet in your arm. If we left it than it'll eventually reach your heart and kill you, so what we did was we amputated your arm and gave you a little project the military was working on. It's called automail." Now Tempest's right arm is completely metal. "You're very lucky to be alive" said the doctor. "Cant I go home doc?" said Tempest "No you need to keep resting you only just woke up from a coma and you want to go home?" "Yeah doc, my girlfriend is probably worried sick about me. She has no idea I was shot" Tempest had to stay in the hospital for a few more days. "Ok, tell you what stay for one more day take some meds and we'll see how you do." Said the doctor "sounds good" "ok for now rest up." Revflames recived a phone call from the hospital that Tempest is alive. Revflames made his way to the hospital and got to the room Tempest was at. "Hey buddy? You ok?"Said Revflames "yeah I'm fine. Just can't wait to get out of here." Revflames chuckled "anyways, where are we exactly?" "where in New York." Tempest looks down and says "I thought I was really dead for a second. It just... happened so fast. I didn't know what to do. I saw a white light and then I saw myself on the floor. It was like a dream but at the same time it felt real. I saw myself all bloody, then I was just standing there in front of my body, and I couldn't do anything then I felt a cold chill down my spine. Like I felt that I was gonna go to hell" Revflames notices tears coming from Tempest's eyes "dude, man I... wow" the nurse comes in the room and says "sorry but visiting hours are over. "Hey man, call me if ya need anything, ok bro?" "Yeah." The next day Tempest feels a bit better, he takes the medicine the doctor told him to take, and he was on his way to the airport with Revflames to go to his home in Chicago. They both took a cab to the airport. On the way there during the whole long drive, it was quiet. Tempest and Revflames didn't have anything to say. Once at the airport they had to go through the security check point. Tempest had his arm X-rayed. After the checkpoint they headed off to the plain which was ready to leave. After a long flight they arrive at Chicago. Revflames calls a taxi to take him and Tempest home. While on the way home Tempest thinks to himself "why do I feel so weird. I don't feel like myself." 27 minutes after leaving the airport he arrives at his house and tells Revflames "cyah later man" and the cab drives away. At this point he hopes Ivory isn't going to get mad. He opens the door. He walks in and heads for the kitchen. No one seems to be home; he keeps looking around the house hoping someone is home, but doesn't find anyone. He goes back to the kitchen and gets some chips that were in the top cabinet over the microwave and heads to where the T.V is and sits on the couch. He turns on the T.V. A few moments later he hears someone outside, he checks the window. It's Ivory! But with someone else. As Ivory puts the key in the lock Tempest had had already opened the door. Ivory and the person that was with her were in shock. "TEMPEST?!" said Ivory all confused "THEY TOLD ME YO... I... IM...I don't know what to say. "Welcome back from war would be very nice to say" Said Tempest with anger "who's this?" "Me? I'm Spencer." "He's my........boyfriend...." Tempest was petrified when he heard that, his eyes flooded with tears "Tempest I'm sorry I thought you were dead, I haven't heard from you after I sent the last letter. And I got pretty lonely" "of course. I received the letter about 4 days ago and only just read it" Tempest shows the letter to Ivory "No way, Tempest the letter is 3 months old, " "So you want me to move out huh?" "Tempest? I'm sorry I don't want you to go.... I love you and I love Spencer. I... I don't know what to do" Said Ivory confused. "Do what your heart tells you" Tempest said "I'm going to stay in a motel until you think about who you want to spend the rest of your life with." six hours later, Tempest receives a phone call from Ivory "I'm sorry Tempest but it's not possible for us to keep seeing each other, I'm sorry it has to end this way" "So you're throwing everything we had away?" "I'm sorry, but you never know maybe in the future we'll meet again, I wish you luck in your life. Bye" Ivory Hangs up. Tempest has now lost the thing he wanted to keep the most...Ivory... and yet, Tempest can't help to look at his dog tags to remind him of what it says.