Honest Denial
Anyway, as i said before, feedback would be nice. depending on the feedback i may, or may not, make the second chapter and by that continue the story. **honest denial** "fuck!"
Stork Inc. [Archives]
This is a literary experiment and open to feedback on refinement and continual ideas. plumes of white smoke were being pumped out by several spires, bouncing up and down as they vivaciously pushed out the benign emissions.
Surface: Doomed Planet-Excerpt 6-The Man Who Wore Silver
Even the rhino on ios that ripped a supertree out of the ground wasn't causing this much feedback. "don't you see that you've lost!"
The Dark City
I had an idea for this setting and character previously so i thought i'd test it out while learning to write in second person ^_^ if you like it i may continue to write about it, depends on the feedback i get. enjoy! the dark city it's cold here.
Plans in Motion
As always comments and feedback are welcome. **plans in motion** the white wolf ran madly through the woods. he was close to the vampire encampment.
The night of dragons
Any kind of feedback is really appreciated <3 it's been a long, hot day. the sun had already set behind the western cliffs from hours but the warm air that still blew across all the valley kept the temperature high.
The Stranger
#1 of traveller's tales _this is my first story so i would really appreciate feedback and comments. yiff will be appearing, but not in the first few chapters.
If You Make a Wolf a Slave Part 3: He May Struggle with his New Life
feedback is always appreciated! if you like what you see, then click that watch button. thanks! if you make a wolf a slave part 3: he may struggle with his new life ethan couldn't keep this up, not forever.
Chapter 2
Remember to leave feedback so i can improve to story! thanks guys!! the final bell rings signifying freedom until the beginning of first period tomorrow morning.
Galaxy: part 4
feedback is apreciated. languages: "english" "_unige_" \*thoughts\* disclaimer: characters belong to me unless mentioned otherwise. * * * **[several hours ago]** _"what do you mean i'm being moved to a secure facility?!"
A Soldier's Heart Chapter Five: John
Anyway, feedback and corrections are always appreciated. i woke up to the sound of a shower running. i looked at the clock and it was about 7 am, but the room was still fairly dark due to the heavy maroon curtains.
Adventures in College: Chapter Two
Thank you to all my watchers and any feedback is greatly appreciated.