Regretful
As always, i'd love to have feedback! the wolf sat, once more, but, it was different, this time. he no longer had that old pain, that old, crushing, companion. instead, it was...
A Soldier's Heart Chapter Five: John
Anyway, feedback and corrections are always appreciated. i woke up to the sound of a shower running. i looked at the clock and it was about 7 am, but the room was still fairly dark due to the heavy maroon curtains.
Chapter 3 of: Not your Average School Year
If you guys can give me some healthy feedback to improve my writing/story please put it in the comments. your criticism is greatly appreciated.
Lost Into The Past Chapter 1
All feedback is appreciated, even negative feedback, as long as it's constructive criticism. anything that isn't constructive criticism i'll most likely ignore, as it won't help me in any way.
What Once Was Eden Chapter 3 Part 2 of 2
While hardly a huge talk fest, this site gets the most feedback of the three. (scary huh) and i love to hear from people as often as possible.
Relaxing, Piece by Piece
Feeling feedback coming from parts of himself he could not see or feel, separated out across the entirety of the spa complex.
Dragon's Reign - Chapter 1: Dragon's Dawn
Author's note: for writers feedback is essential to fix mistakes, avoid repetitive ones and most important, to improve their style, so they can give you the content you like.
Mew's love Pt.1
Please this is my first story ever i just got an idea and when on from there please show me mistake's and i will fix them and feedback is welcome more will come soon in mew's love pt.2
Art Block
Please provide feedback, as i hope to continue editing and making these acceptable for publication. obstructions, strewn across the narrow path, leave no alternative but going back.
When I saw you past the breeze.
\<3 comments are very welcome and appreciated, after all i need feedback! \<3 hope you enjoy! * * * when i saw you past the breeze- written by xinnova2 a cool breeze blew past the shores.
Wolf's Heart Prologue
(this is my first story any positive feedback would be appreciated. this is a flashback.) a young male wolf sits there alone in the corner of the doorway reading during recess.
Relearning
Don't worry about the sudden pronoun shifts for the great wolf, that'll happen when you decide you're gender fluid~ as always, i'd love any feedback, my friends 'still the fear i can't contain' the wolf blinked themselves back.