A New Dawn - Chapter 3 (Home Coming)
I watched him leave before turning back to the table, jason and michael took a seat on the far side of the table next to callidus, michael making sure to sit between them to try and stop any unfortunate events that may take place due to jason's 'commentary
Counter Earth Chronicles Fallen Empire Chapter 114: Ascension (Conclusion)
I escorted him into the great room catching just the tail end of the commentary. _"...he is getting a second chance because the civilization that would judge him for what he has done and the society that he affected technically doesn't exist anymore...
The Family Vulpes Chp2
It would have been cause for a sigh of relief, if val hadn't been concerned that making any form of noise at this point would simply invite more awkward commentary from the older tod.
Navigating in a Changed World - The Great Inauguration
No speciest commentary? no hateful glare that says that you would skin me alive if you could?" the fox pressed, and this now caused even the buffalo, who was driving, to look back at them through his rearview mirror.
The Risen Curtain - Chapter 6: Special Mission
Nick felt his stomach tightening, what he just hear among the commentaries of the animals around him seemed to be the last thing that was missing for him to be convinced that what he thought was true.
Jim's Night Out ("Jim and the Frog" series, #2)
"now you even provide political commentary? seriously, eating other people's waste can't be sanitary!" "well, well...look who we have here..." oh, no. that voice... i turned to the squirrel behind me. "...max." i said, expressionless.
Luca's Story Ch. 9
The boys seemed to be drifting off, so they'd probably be able to get along for a while before zee made any commentary on their secret conversation. beccah felt her phone vibrate against her thigh through the fabric of her purse and dress.
Novel Chapter 1
_it was a commentary on how i'm viewed, not how i exist._ he forced a sigh of acknowledgment, forcing me to smile as i rubbed his snout. my mother had gotten cyrus for me years ago in hopes to drag me out of myself.
Jumping Mouse, Part 1
The coyote's commentary didn't help, and another flick of my tail conveyed a somewhat less polite message than the first, but at least he shut up. "how did you come to own such a shop, in a town like this?" i asked. "not much opportunity, on the rez.
Fugitive's Trust Chapter 1 Part 2 of 2
It's generally commentary about the story, not necessarily from the author. in some cases, you definitely want to skip a preface because some commentators assume you've already read the story or at least the cliff notes.
Attis
## ATTIS "My grandmother once said: 'You cannot take anything with you. Not even your own shirt', while looking out of the window, fixated on nothing in particular while contemplating the death of her husband." "That day she came back alone....
The Tide of Bigger Things chapter 2
Chapter 2 Well, I was making my to the tavern like we always do. While you were home sick like the mutt you are. "Hey no slapping!" Anywho, I wasn't sure how much the medicine would cost so I decided to go for one more run just to be safe. The pub was...