Behind Enemy Lines: Chapter One
I take constructive criticism as well as compliments, but please go easy on me since its my first story! i will hopefully post more just as long as life doesn't mess with anything :d. this is section, over and out.
Suicide: Prologue Remade
As i promised last year, i am going to be remaking my first story series. as you can read from the title it the prologue right now. if you want, you can look back at the old version and compare.
TLOS: Darkness Rises: Chapter 1
Hello this is my first story on my first chapter :d. please go easy on me i don't own any characters from spyro,kingdom hearts ,or final fantasy. i made up my own characters for all three.
THE WAR
This is my first story so if you want to go ahead and judge hard i dont mind now imnot the best speller so if you cant stand bad spellingpleasego to another story. i also need editors so if you want tohelpme editmy story let me know. alright here goes. it
Love’s A Double Edged Sword - Chapter One
#1 of love’s a double edged sword this is my first story, please be nice. i am welcome to ideas if any of you want to give me any. hope you enjoy. those song lyrics are my own, i am trying to write a song with them.
Rex Chapter 1
**_this is my first story on here and i know it is kinda short but i have another chapter mostly finished so hopefully i can get that out soon if you have any feedback please tell me in the comments.
Introduction: Abandoned
\*\*author's note\*\* sooo, here's my first story in like 6 months. xd sorry about the extended break. ^^ just been going through a lot of things. break up, irl problems, depression, blah blah blah.
where i came from chapter 1 (beach landing)
#1 of where i came from where i came from. chapter one. beach landing seeing as this is my first story please offer any advice you may have about this. this story takes place during ww2 at the battle of okinawa.
That Day
Note from the writer- this is my first story, so feel free to critique it. i accept you're feedback. april 7, 2008- 5:00 am "riiiiiing riiiiiing!" the alarm clock sprang into life, singing the song of its people.
The Lion King Old Stories of the Past
(well this is my first story ever updated
Callion: Forgotten Lands
This is my first story that i've written in a weekly series i'm going to do. all of these characters are mine and so is the story, if you enjoyed it leave some feedback!
Eionvise Prologue
Author's notes: hey this is my first story and i just want to see how it works out, so please comment and rate xd. this is kinda my first time posting on the site so if i'm missing anything please tell me xd.