Second Draft of First Story
Edited version of my first draft (things with weird names are in latin, they should be in italics but it didn't transfer) it's not pleasant being struck with lightning. neither is being trapped underwater for a minute straight.
Werewolf Tale II - Chapter 29 - ...And A New Approach
Of course, this being the first draft, there's still more work to do. i can't wait to add this to the ranks of the published novel alongside werewolf tale. until then, enjoy and thank you for reading.
Lenny Gets a Job: As a Maid in a Mansion
It's another rough first draft (as is the theme here in "forgotten drafts"). i had planned to do a series about lenny sow, a hopeless manchild who tries and tries to get a job and fails and fails spectacularly at every one.
Wolfen - Chapter 21
I don't remember if i have said this before on this site, but these stories that i am posting is essentially a first draft.
Ghost of a Rose ~ Chapter 11
I think it flows a lot better than it did before, and at least on first draft this feels like a really good continuation of what’s going on between these two.
Born of Shadow and Wonder
At the moment this is but the first draft and i am working to get it corrected, for i spoted quite some faults. of cause only well after i uploaded the story. -- there you go, corrected and hopefully increased in quality.
Grayson 1
._ ultimately, the first draft was too close to home even for me, and i scrapped it and tried working on a genuinely fictional description of the (yet more puns) elements of the relationship.
A Day To Remember Chapter 4 (Sample)
This is only a first draft and by no means the final cut. please tell me what you think!!!! chapter 4 it only took a little over an hour for joji to finish off the rest of his pack of cigarettes.
Oblivion Chapter 1
Basically this is a first draft of mine. well when i say first, i really mean fourth. i was never pleased with the refinement that took place and so i kept on redoing it over and over. anyways enjoy the first installment of oblivion.
Life is Just a Storm- Chapter 3- Wavering Mind
Dunno if ya know this, but what i upload is basically my first draft and with very little editing. yeah that's bad but i promise i don't do that with stories others ask me to write. ahem. here is chapter 3. 4,119 words. november.
The king in the Summer
You jumps as high as you can, flaring your wings to catch the first draft and soar high. you stroke the wind and rose until the houses were dark, slumbering humps in a sea of electric lights.
LSH 4: Cushions, Confrontation and Comfort food
Meegi said and smiled proudly, “and that's where i could come in… well, hopefully i make the first draft, but rookie players rarely get picked first." reeva tried to hide her concern as she smiled nervously.