Teatime on the Titanic
If that were possible, someone would have done it and history would be rewritten. this is clearly an electrical problem, so stop wasting time. we need to find the source in twenty minutes, or we'll have to start over."
Through Hell [Gorgon/Naga TF/TG]
I've rewritten the first eight chapters now, so all those who were disappointed with the ending get farrrrr more to come. i've made from pretty major changes including which characters even exist, or when they're introduced, so a reread is worth it.
The Archaeologial Dig
#1 of ra's rise rewritten so i'm sure some of you have read my original ra's rise series, but i decided after looking it over, that i'm not really pleased with how abrupt a lot of the chapters felt, so i've decided to come back to them and rewrite the story
Guardian of Time: Chapter II
And not only that, but every timeline that came from the alpha, which easily numbered in the millions, if not billions, had also been irreversibly altered, so that now there were two races of humanoid creatures in the alpha timeline, a rewritten history that
Everyday Vaporeon!
All the cards were off the table, the rules had been rewritten. how could he predict anything? a sudden noise caused him to almost jump out of his skin "vaaaa"he squealed involuntarily as his tail whipped behind him.
Bear Before Blini
Perhaps, someday, i would believe in me the way sasha does, and my programming might begin to be rewritten. part of me wondered if the book he gave to me for winterfest would help.
I, Dacien -- Chapter Twenty: Displacement -- CORRECTED CANONICAL VERSION
#21 of i, dacien rewritten version of chapter twenty. the older version remains available. in which chelm comes to grip with a number of strange truths. # i, dacien ###### a story by onyx tao © 2012 onyx tao [!
The Last Day of November (December Morning Version)
I've been trying to figure out how to go about the next eric and danny stories, so in the meantime, i've rewritten one of my favorite stories in the series.
Midline Shift 32 - Family
Wars come an' go, lines on maps are rewritten, huge cracks run through thuh land rift apart by our sins. we don't have enough people to do everythin' for us.
Blood on Ice - Chapter Fifteen V2
Note: this chapter is the revised version of chapter fifteen so nothing new happens in the plot, but this chapter has been rewritten to be more detailed and to remove the feeling of it being rushed.
My Little Kickaha
No, eighty percent certain that nothing has rewritten history in the twenty minutes since we parted ways." "well, i mean obviously i was a kitten before we came to this world. but in this world i'm a dragon."
Korongo: The Beginnings - Chapters 1-3 Rewrite
Chapter 4: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/36542719/ i have edited and partially rewritten the first three chapters of my korongo story to make the writing less clunky, and i've put them all in one upload for your reading convenience!