The Dragon Spirit Wishes
#1 of the dragon spirit wishes this is my first poem of this sort, so be critical, but understand if it's not great. the dragon spirit wishes i wish i could walk. i wish i could run. i wish i could fly, fly into the sky.
Confusion
Take it easy on the criticism! ;3 the great wolf howled to the empty sky, his confusion his pain plain to hear. "why? why must i endure? all the others receive the happiness they wish for..."
The twining roses
Please give me some constructive criticism and comments.
The twinning roses
Please give me some constructive criticism and comments.
The Daemon
Any idea or criticism on how to improve it would be appreciated.
You
Any constructive-criticism is welcome. ^_^ how many times must i tell you that i'm fine you always loved to point out every single flaw who are you to think that you are divine i'm going to be the first to say that your word is not law.
Secret Rendezvous
Secrecy and discretion for this clandestine rendezvous was critical, as who knew what others with nefarious intent could be watching them.
Dragon RP-Chat
I welcome constructive criticism,such as how to improve the environments or the stroylines,but if you give me hate i will block you lol. also guys,please don't sign up for the rp until at least the continent pangea campaign is up.
Untitled
Hoping some one would read and give me some helpful comments/criticism seated on a bench, tail lying motionless my domain never makes me feel whole.
The Temeraire
Biometric, genetic, and neurologic security systems are installed in all critical areas of the ship to prevent theft, including all control consuls.
Jecht's Story
Jecht was often criticized for being a flaming hot-head. but it was not a good day to be a criticizer. hell, said criticizers were flying out the bar window now.
The Mourning After - Chapter 24 (More Q's than A's)
I am at a critical point in my training where i need to learn to totally suppress and control the spirit or..." his statement didn't need to be finished. we all knew what would happen. this was the reason he couldn't stay here in zangar.