Wolfmaker - Chapter One
This is the first chapter of the first draft of a fantasy novel i started in july nanowrimo, and revised extensively in nanowrimo this past november. please, let me know what you think.
The Missing Son, Chapter 14
The is a first draft of what is the first orr family chronicles novel on the schedule for publication (no dates yet, probably a few years away) it is the first book planned in a trilogy.
City of Light: Chapter 2
As you'll notice this was originally part of the first chapter of the first draft. i hope you enjoy the slight changes.
Only Human (Chapter 10)
However, it is still just a first draft. i am equally interested in critiques of it, things that would make it better, things that should be changed, etc. (i know i should make the chapters longer, so don't even bother saying it.)
Jeremy 012; Today's Forgotten Hero
Its mostly in first draft form for me but i don't find myself changing too much as i edit, unless i come up with an idea in the mean time.
A Silly, Merrie, Looney Story (Commission for DragonfireNY)
Cimmaron took a few more turns, down a few more hallways, past evern more artifacts and objects of value and historical signifigance moments before they were destroyed: the first draft of the declaration of independence, the wheel of the _titanic,_ the original
Amber Silverblood: Silverpack, a Sneak Peek!
Remember, this is still taken from the first draft so some things are liable to change during editing. and don't forget to let me know what you think! **chapter one** the forest whispered to me, and i howled in reply.
Jeremy 045; To Save The Day
I'm way ahead in writing out the first draft but there may be more cameos in the future.
Dons Nation 4 - Week 5
Last season, the head coach of the team, jack knight, drafted his sister jacqueline knight for the first draft pick. then he gave quarterback roy dejesus the boot after the first week when he threw for five interceptions.
The Legend of Spyro: Path of Delusions Book X Chapter 64
What about planning and first drafts? with us coming to the castle you might think that there was no time for hobbies, especially for a queen.” spyro noted with true admiration, as a purple dragon it was in his nature to value multitasking.
Raised by the Machine - A Memoir (Chapter One)
However, i'm a big baby and feel uncomfortable with sharing a written work of fiction with the world when it's only in its first draft (although the concept of writing a complete draft in a single month is a fantastic feat to embark on).
Unfinished Project: Shujaa
Note, this is a first draft and therefore prone to spelling errors and grammatical mistakes. hopefully not many though, as i try to keep fairly tight first drafts.