The Queen of Winter

I have difficulties with this language, if you see errors, put a comment with the errors and correct them. i try to do my best for making that the people enjoys my stories. ace is one of my characters oc and snow is a character oc from a da user.

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Digital Adventures Chapter One. And it begins.

Oh yeah if you see spelling errors or grammer errors tell me so that i can fix them thank.

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Weird Writings

Ill place periods where i think theygo notepad is getting me more red errors and blue errors but theyre not always right. me know i doing right. computer showing lot of blue ann red. do i say me or i again? is there another version of me?

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it could happen,,, part 4

#3 of it could happen ###### i have only just noticed how many typographical errors i had made in the last chapt... ###### i have only just noticed how many typographical errors i had made in the last chapter.

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Contact - Part 2

So if you spot the errors. do go easy on me! and any advice and critique are welcome! i am doing this as a way to tell my stories to the world. and to get better at writing my stories at the same time.

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Kaotic beginnings - A Kaos Army story - Chapter 14

"and your errors of judgement? are _they_ going to happen again? we were stripped of our powers! nightmares were murdered!" the dragon looked subdued, "i can make no promises.

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The Hunters Gather - 1

He knelt to correct his error and thus i was the first to see the prey emerge from the dust."

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Test.

If you could comment that would be great to show the error is gone. thanks,

DoC-Ep28-The Last training episode-

Issac was able to sense that some sort of bigger attack was coming, and the team had trained yet again for the last time to make sure there would be no room for any error while fighting for maybe the last time.

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Dr. Whooves: Chapter 5: So This Is A Game?

The doctor stayed silent letting her see the error in her words "i... i see. let us hope then, hope that he will change his ways."

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