Trollhunters Part 2 Review
I mention this as it leads to a critique for season 2. i waited up to watch season 2 (or part 2, as netflix categorized it as), and repeated the all night binge i had done with the previous season.
Three Years - Prologue
critique is very welcome, i want to improve my writing so i can deliver the very best, and if you ever see anything you think should change/written differently or just in general things that seem off, please do tell me so, just be nice about it!
Glass of 2014
The judges thanked him and finished writing their critiques. up next was quinton.
//?A Curious Sergal: Part 6.001
A curious sergal part 5: [http://www.sofurry.com/view/377316](http://www.sofurry.com/view/377316) if anyone would like to offer ideas of where to go with it, or have any comments, critiques, or questions, i think now is the time, as i will not be
Soft Like Snow- Ch.1
Please critique, as i am always looking for help with writing! \*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\* the snow fell lightly and steadily upon the cobblestone road, covering it with a thin layer of white.
Blank Verse Essay On The Futility of So-Called "A.I." Art
Though they indeed were separate artifacts the meaning, the intentionality, of both were homoousion--the new and polished version, and the older rough that drove my husband nigh self-critique mad.
Deaths demise (ch1)
I've not tried anything like this before so any constructive critique ia appreciated, please enjoy) "i had a wonderful dream last night, a man stabs me for an empty wallet and receives instead a bullet" dale lay there thinking of the wonderful dream until
One More Chance in Love
I would also like any critique of this from anybody. * * * a happy heart is what always brings good things to the table. a loving heart shares affections, caring, kindness, and felicity. but not everyone could keep that kind of heart.
Evil Genius Ch. 1
Feel free to give constructive critique or comments. nothing spectacular happens in this chapter though unfortunately.
Rapture
Comments, critiques, your own opinion about the story is encouraged. this is simply my fantasy, and also therapy, in a way. to give me hope and to keep the bad thoughts away. never give up.
Punk'd Out
A punk tf written as a birthday present for renyard2001 over at fa: it was definitely a fun write using music as a hypnotic trigger~ as always, comments and critiques are appreciated!
Master's Pet - Prologue: The Storyteller Appears
Any and all critiques are welcome and desired the vast room slowly filled with furs of all ages, as it did muted, excited voices began filling the void in anticipation of what was to come.