An Interview with Paper_Paws
The biggest thing i look for is vivid imagery, and the second is stylistic readability. the two often go hand in hand, since imagery is a stylistic balancing act. too many adjectives, for example, can make something less descriptive, not more.
Mending the Broken.
I can't piece the imagery together, i just know he's been hurt badly." she replied while holding on to him tightly. "do you know where he's at?" "the only place i know he would be is on travaina iv." he got up and started get out some clothes for them.
Summer Rains
"i looked it up on google maps, but the satellite imagery just showed trees and brush all over the place!" "yeah, it's kind of hidden," responded noah. "not exactly visible from above, but it's there alright."
Superiority Chapter 4
Satellite imagery can only go so far. we need a ground view of a canadian installation not far to the northeast of here." said the lieutenant, surprising david. "this is a simple scouting mission. i believe you recruits can handle that."
Sanrose Bio (Updated with birth history)
After the portals closure, the prophet quickly destroyed any way that the humans could get in and created an imagery that the dragons inside this room were slain and
A Dream Most Surreal
V=n-hq3zpsmmg a small bit of insight into ildac's backstory, and some pretty imagery and mysticism and all neat little things that i probably find more interesting than you do because i'm weird, but i hope you enjoy it anyway.
Their Color
This story is a bit of an experiment for me, as well as practice with description and imagery. i twisted the concept from a game/practice method in the furrag forums i found a few months ago.
August 6: Tora’s Spaghetti
Now how would one get a nostalgic photo from creepy imagery was beyond me, but it was a while since i went into the old school.
The Second Promise: Chapter 3, The Living Comet
The other side of kyrik was unable to articulate its intentions, but the imagery of the bone entered his mind. there was something suspicious about the bone, something they hadn't noticed, but it was lost in translation.
Sonic.EX3: Chapter11
The floor was gray and flat with granite detail while the background had a cavernous imagery going on with it. parts of the room depicted had torch lights illuminating the chamber. i didn't like the feeling it gave me when i looked onto it.
Isolation-Excerpt 35-Heavy Metal
I responded by falling to my back, just barely avoiding the spinning pike, "the operator is using thermal imagery." "copy!", alcatraz shouted. "got it!", mike replied.
Earthlike, Vaguely
For mariner, sleep was fitful, active and full of disconnected imagery, memories, and feelings. a kiss half remembered and a hand, tightly holding his own. glittering beams of light and tracers racing across the sky.