Out the Airlock: Chapter 1
Please, i really would like some feedback on the story. i hope that it has a good interest hook and attention grabber that draws the reader into the story.
Gold Lightning Series 2…Part One
Plz comment and vote for feedback to make my stories better. gold is out look for food with his boyfriend black lightning. they want to harvest some seeds to make a garden for gold. they have apple trees and banana trees.
Poll/ Channel Update
Just wanting some feedback as to the work i'm doing. hey everyone! wanted to see what kind of content you guys would like to see coming, also just give a little update as to what's in the works right now.
Commissions
I do expect feedback from everybody, and please be harsh. i won't get better if i don't know what mistakes i'm making. just no belligerent comments.
Chestnut
Please provide feedback, as i hope to continue editing and making these acceptable for publication.
All
Please provide feedback, as i hope to continue editing and making these acceptable for publication. as all is all there is to give, the purpose that i live, then giving all is all i'll do, should giving all please you.
Poem: Wolf Love
I'd love as much feedback as possible. and the name is who the poem is about, i abreviated to keep his anenimity. **wolf love** - bdm you are my wolf you're respectful you're loyal you're protective you are my alpha.
Forbidden love
feedback would be great. thank you and make sure to stay furry. forbidden love i would just sit in a chair in the park near a big tree. waiting as the day goes by, for the love that i couldn't see.
Epilog for Warmaster Jack: Bors
Please leave any comments, feedback, or notes under [that story entry](https://www.sofurry.com/view/694338), and not here! many thanks, onyx tao
Goldenwolf's Edda
I love feedback. or better yet, get inspired and write your own! lo! harken unto me!
The pokemon trainer...
#2 of laura (old character) i would realy appreciate some feedback ^_^ i was drawing and sketching in my book until i heard somthing behind me..right away i turn and see a smiling trainers face.
The final stop is here
Thank you for reading my poem, pleas give some feedback to my poem.