Change, What The World Needed
Xd anyway let me get some feedback on this please! please do not distribute! blurry images, a fuzzy face surrounded by darkness and light, a muzzle, glasses...images flashing before my eyes...what had happen?
Starfire the Lone Courier....Prologue
I just want to do a short thing...oh what's the word i am looking for \*thinking\*...............i guess prologue is the word i am looking for and if anyone likes it i may possibly consider doing a story so please if you are reading this i would love feedback
Luke (chap. 1)- courage
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Harper
I always welcome feedback to my work and hope you enjoy reading it as much as i enjoy writing it. the headlights of passing automobiles threw his shadow against the red brick wall, the dark form growing and shrinking as the vehicles drove by.
My Pain is His Suffering Chapter 1
And i would love constructive feedback or any feedback, and if you want me to change what things mean like \* for thoughts.
mercenaries short 2 - an unprofessional diagnosis
#3 of mercenaries some swearing and minor violence after the mysterious events surrounding sooty, mable gives her thoughts on the situation second attempt at writing, first attempt at humour and banter feedback welcome as i'd like to try bigger written projects
Unexpected Exploration (part 1)
feedback is appreciated but please be nice. i do not take hard criticism very well. hello! my name is crytus! i'm a bright orange fox anthro with very blue eyes. despite my essentric colours, i'm actually quite nervous and shy.
Chapter 6
feedback, please, good or bad, i love the feedback, especially those who call me evil ;) but i shouldn't be getting any of those posts on this chapter.
Grad-Bash Part 2
#2 of scout's honor chapter 3, a little rushed due to life's little surprises (i wrote this in a car stuck with friends for 6 hours, kill me now lol) but i hope you enjoy nonetheless =) also give me some feedback, anything i need to work on?
The Mute - Chapter 4.5: Clearing Things Up
As always, feedback and ratings are much appreciated! <3 - moocat * * * time: september 10th, 9:00 * * * i woke up with my pillow moist from tears. it took a few moments to gather my thoughts... ...but then i remembered what kyle said last night.
Breath of the Nile
Please, leave feedback if you liked it. if not, then okay, but i do always appreciate feedback from others. thank you!!!! as the rain pattered against the window, katrina slowly sat up in bed, staring out of the foggy window.
Can I Tell You Something?
I hope you enjoy, feedback is always appreciated. **can i tell you something?** can i tell you something?