My Guardian Demons - Part 1
They didn't command me to do things, or criticize my every action, but seemed to be content with forming a sort of commentary track to everything i did.
Chapter One
Hey guys this is my first work on here and i have not done creative writing in two years (i've been doing argumentative and analysis essays for my ap classes) so i would really enjoy it if you guys would criticize me and don't be nice i need someone like simon
Past to Present
"father hired you to help me and teach me... but i don't need a critic... i need a friend."
"Family Tails" - Epilogue
Please feel free to leave any comments, suggestions, observations, constructive criticisms, questions, and thoughts in the comment section.
Chakai OC info
Any advice and constructive criticism welcome. background chakai is an open source ai. available as a free download on a website with hundreds of other ais. the reason there are so many different ais is due to the limitations put on them by law.
Chapter 34: Meetings with The Armor Evolution.
I thank you for those who participate and i do accept any critics and/or comments to my bad writing skills and many more (lol). thank you.
The Council of Species
I am a new writer, obviously, and i need criticism. the council of species is a meeting of many gods in the world of vessel. the gods that come to this meeting each represent a species of mortals living in vessel.
D.M.O.N. - Chapter 6: The First Expirience in Battle.
Thank you for any comments and critics that you gave me so far.
Tales of the Huntsville Mayors - Prologue
Fifty years later, no one remembers the critics. the journey hasn't always been smooth, though.
Into the Horizon: Power Contested Part 3
This one was the sub-light's going critical. dasher heard the door open and realized that he was helpless to do anything to save himself. he still didn't have his vision.
1 Voice
criticism? comment away! her name is pronounced jee-ar-eeh-en . a voice emanated from the mountains. it was a droning and humming voice, deep and warm and tired. no one else lived around to hear the voice, just giarien.
Introduction: Abandoned
**** post thoughts, constructive criticism, and other comments in the comments below. ^^** * * * introduction: abandoned by snowiri the crystalline droplets of water flooded the desolate landscape around the broken canine.