Peppers Are Hot, Keys Are Cold
Joey and kit finish te milk and move on to the next task, bumping the critics into last place. "hurry up, eddy!" barbara says. "we're in last and you don't chug faster, we're done for." "i'm almost done!" eddy says.
Bakeneko's Curse pt. 1
A story i wrote about one of my favorite characters. any criticism is wonderful, i'm a horrible writer v,v neveah, a bakeneko, sits atop a tree looking out over a city filled with lights and sounds.
Past Dues PART 4 (Shark Anthro Story) [Commission]
She gave a little wave feeling a bit bashful with all of the extra attention on her, but she had wanted to be here for michael at this critical moment.
The True And Potent SECRETS of SoFurry Story Formatting
_** preparing text for publication on sofurry is a process, and the only critical part to that process is starting off with text formatted in some way not friendly to sofurry's simple web editing entry box.
Down One Up One
The critics collect the next clue from a watcher who was set up by toner in case they used their pass. with one team skipping the challenge, the others are in a tight race to get out of last.
Brother Light, Brother Dark: In Which a Royal Entrance is Made
And carefully sifting through them, he found himself to be ashamed of two things: that he was only now critically examining his physique, and that he was so critically examining his physique.
Another Tundra Race
The mountain climbers claimed victory again and the critics fell short. however, luck was on their side as it was all non-elimination. 7 teams are still left in the race. who will fall into last?
ST: TDF Chapter 1
Then added, "main power plant is in critical condition. energy readings show high levels of radiation are slowly building. three hours before it reaches critical mass and self-destructs." fox sighed and shook her head. "anyone or anything aboard?"
?A Boy and His Ampharos
So please enjoy it and criticism is greatly appreciated. a boy and his ampharos warning: this story contains pokemon and soft non-fatal vore so if you dont like this thing do no read this story.
Unified Species of the Galaxy (Scrapped)
This theory is heavily criticized however but the critics admit that they cannot come up with a more convincing theory to replace the fragmented asteroid theory.
A Special Present for a Special Father
Constructive criticism is welcomed as this is my first story i have written. * * * "what a beautiful day" said the white tiger as he stretched and got out of bed.
Mist-Chapter 1
I love criticism so don't be afraid to hurt my feelings. thanks.