Adventures in College: Intro
Any feedback or constructive criticism is greatly appreciated and i hope you guys enjoy it^^ if i get mostly positive feedback i will make it a series but i'm pretty busy so the wait may be long between chapters:/ this will be just a short introduction. #
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Of course, they were in varying states of having their brains installed, so expecting productive customer feedback was a bit unreasonable.
Chapter 3 of: Not your Average School Year
If you guys can give me some healthy feedback to improve my writing/story please put it in the comments. your criticism is greatly appreciated.
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Just as i was starting to wrap my mind around the tactile feedback i was getting, i noted some audio feedback that was much easier to understand.
George the Jungle Man
George of the jungle the movie was one of my favorites growing up. you can tell where the inspiration came from. any feedback is appreciated for future stories this isn't my first story but it's my first time posting. feedback encouraged.
Echoes of Invasion
I'm open to any and all feedback but comments are preferred._ _~stay crispy_
Astral High - Prologue
Point being, leave some feedback, enjoy, and get ready for another story! i awoke with a start, as if my alarm clock had gone off. i hit the off button, and looked around the room.
Growing Up Gay In Highschool: Book 1: Freashmen
Thanks for reading and hope to get some feedback soon from everyone ^\_^;
The Hunter's Choice Chapter One: Young Blood
Again as i said before this is my first story and i would like feedback good and bad but please be gentle with the bad feedback but yes i will update with chapter two when i get enough time but for those who do tea this first chapter and like it i promise
Rescue
Well, for now i'm looking for feedback on this particular story, as well as just trying to post it somewhere it will actually be seen.
Of Satyr and Gods Pt. 1
If i get good feedback, i may write up the second part. which will actually have something sexy in it._ crashing through the undergrowth, the girl fled. her sobs were loud and her breathing heavy as she blindly ran through the trees.
Rebirth, prologue
#1 of the cycle of the phoenix: rebirth this story is here partly as a teaser and partly because i need some feedback to get motivated.