Echoes of Invasion
I'm open to any and all feedback but comments are preferred._ _~stay crispy_
Chapter Nine
Walls and reach the mic, there would be no feedback.
Chatline: Epilogue
I also want to give an extra-special thanks to those who provided feedback. your advice and support was invaluable.
Discovery - Chapter 5, Forgotten
#5 of theorium chronicles enjoy and do leave feedback, it actually allows me to become a better writer, which in turn gives you better stories to read. you know, if you don't just realize there's other writers. again, enjoy and leave feedback!
JUXTAPOSITION Chapter 1 - Sounds of Silence
Extra thanks to solipsisticnarcissistic for support and continues feedback! (ps. this takes place during bolt's journey, after his self-realization and before he reaches hollywood.)
Aciec Aeternam (etarnal Battlefield) Into and info
I hope you all enoy, and i would love to have feedback on the chapters!
Dullahan
I turned this story in and got some pretty good feedback from my teacher. i recently found the story while digging through some papers so i figured i'd post it. any feedback would be greatly appreciated. hope you all enjoy!
Static Memory Record 86-75309
Just as i was starting to wrap my mind around the tactile feedback i was getting, i noted some audio feedback that was much easier to understand.
Der Einschlag Kapitel 1
Ende des ersten kapitels schreibt mir bitte eure meinung(en) und euer feedback. ob ich noch irgendwas verbessern soll oder ob es (bisher) gut so ist wie es ist. freue mich auf euer feedback mumble
Rising Power - Chapter 5, A gift from the King
#5 of ebony chronicles enjoy and do leave feedback, it actually allows me to become a better writer, which in turn gives you better stories to read. you know, if you don't just realize there's other writers. again, enjoy and leave feedback!
The Hunter's Choice Chapter One: Young Blood
Again as i said before this is my first story and i would like feedback good and bad but please be gentle with the bad feedback but yes i will update with chapter two when i get enough time but for those who do tea this first chapter and like it i promise
Chapter 2: The Beginning of a Business Relationship
Please give me some feedback below.