Delay Of Game
Words are by myself, with editorial help from (and many, many thanks to) fa: john_sanders and fa: huskyteer , and the amazing art to go with this is by fa: hufnaar. gotta love a team effort!
Zootopia: First Salvo Chapter 17
Ok....ok....i read what you wrote in the newspaper, i read the editorial your mother showed me..." "and?" william asked. "honest dad...please be honest with me?"
The Saga of Fidonhaal - Daughters of the East - Preview 2
**author's note: the text within this preview chapter may not entirely match that of the final publication, as editorial work was still ongoing at the time of this sample's submission for public viewing.** **- - - -
Worlds Apart - Chapter Ten
#10 of worlds apart as usual, many thanks go out to victus lupus and thegoldenunicorn for their heroic editorial and creative help!
Richard Cory
However, as i still believe in the story's merit, i have done some further editing (including reversing some questionable editorial decisions by the publisher), bringing back the tale to its full strength. i hope that you enjoy it.
Scepters
editorials in radical papers charge his majesty with subjecting the aernian people to grave and injurious tyranny. but in tabisthalia, a crowd was--what did mr. couthragn say? it was 'defused,' instead of massacred.
The Family Vulpes Chp8
"i just...like i said; giving the whole first book to someone like gazelle, even with full editorial control...i must admit i'm worried about alienating the other predator and prey couples out there who-" the fleecy femme paused, nibbling at her lower lip.