The Uncorrupted
Looking primarily for constructive critisism to improve my writing skills :) and yes, i use the word "it" a lot in refering to the undead creature.
Chronicals of the Black Guard: Chapter 3
Never once critisizing or complaining that he should have done this or that. what suprised him most was, as he finished, he felt her arms slide around his shoulders, hugging him softly from behind.