The Dark Blog: Submitting a novel
I don't know that i would call that a hard and fast rule, but it's a good piece of advice. too many characters described too briefly will just leave us confused.
Burdens - Chapter 126: Waiting
He thought maybe he could get some advice from the nurse. he always seemed to be helpful, after all. he pressed the button and waited. it took a little longer than usual, but not by much. he came in with the same smile and demeanor.
Curiosity
To whoever follows in my footsteps, i leave this woefully inadequate advice. the same advice my late supervisor told me; and her own senior told her. leave well enough alone. your curiosity will be the death of you.
10 Second Tip: STUCK on a Short Story?
If my rather straight-laced (and occasionally snotty,) advice does not suit your creative style, by all means, ignore it._ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ **ookami kasumi**
Chapter 9: His Little Bird
It was a bright spring afternoon, and after pinning the sheep early, a troubled zalia had torn her father from zaldon and aliona in order to seek his advice.
Serval and Sheep (Chapter 37)
Brian offers advice for a friend of a friend. "desmond!" the familiar coo of a certain rock dove stops desmond in his tracks.
What Defines Us
Not saying your advice is bad, it's certainly good. it's advice i wish you could give dad. the guy hit me, though. i was never good enough for him. he was an abusive jerk and you know it. why would i want to go and show him \*any\* positive attention?
Jeremy 012; Today's Forgotten Hero
When he was finished he sat back and waited for zane to give his advice. "that's," he said almost laughing "about what you have to expect from most people.
Lost Into the Past Chapter 8
Conductor didn't think he'd ever have to ask for advice on this, however... he really needed it. "i need... p-parenting advice." he seemed kind of embarrassed about this.
Gene, the Genial, Substance Lovin' Sheepdog
He's always giving out firm yet kind and understanding advice and favors, always giving and never expecting a thing in return, and he's taken the heat for a bud(no pun intended) more times than anyone can recall.
Without A Shadow Of A Doubt - Chapter 1 - The Beginning
Also, i'd appreciate comments with constructive critism, advice, anything really.
Light Bane: Chapter 7
I haven't had a chance to thank you for your advice." "advice on what?"