//?A Curious Sergal: Part 1.001
These will be fixed, but any feedback is nice and streamlines the revision process (so please leave some). also, while the main charecter's name is jax, i just put that in for a temporary name... it will be subject to change in the future.
Replacement (Part 3)
#4 of replacement i'm sure many of you are aware of how this part was before the first revision. for those that don't know, it's best not to say anything until after you've read it. let's just say, i don't write yiffy stuff anymore.
MagnaFlame Renamon 2
((now revised)) magnaflame renamon part 2 as stephen turned around to see what it was, he saw.... "ogremon" he whispered to himself in horror, a shiver going down his spine.
Outfoxed
The first to be revised and the first to get a limited print release. enjoy.
Disclosure
"i'm told that i would do far better with a revised edition. that old volume at least led me to timewind. the other thing that got me here was the sword itself.
Reaching for the Stars - Chapter 38: Home Sweet Home, Part 1
"i'm going to ask for a final revision next week, then propose for defence." ellie seethed at him. "you are so. damn. lucky." martin said as if he were offended. the wolf just shrugged nonchalantly.
ROI: The Pale Snow - Chapter 4
He would destroy any evidence, revise the sagas suitable to newer generations with promise over shame. the ironwoods would be a name of legend, and he would do so gladly. a faint knocking tap from the door caused doran's paw to an abrupt halt.
The Great War,Hell Division, Heroes Of The Dovahreich Chapter 3
If something has a beginning the thing has an end as well story devised and written by doomfond copyright belongs to doomfond story revision
Castaways - Chapter 2
.^ i spent a little time revising some things and trying my best to polish up the spelling and grammar. i dug this beast out of the depths of my old external hard drive so it was a little gnarly when i first read it.
Land of the Free and Home of the Slaves: Chapter 3
The wolf was rapidly revising his opinion of those in the medical profession. it certainly explained a lot if the auction houses were paying doctors to release slaves for sale early.
Wolfmaker - Chapter Two
This is the single largest piece of writing i have ever done, but expect revised chapters eventually. as before, please let me know what you think. the rain was coming harder now. ambrose let out a whine as he shivered.
Journey of an Outcast - Part 4
(i revised the story from the old version. i hope i made it better if you still don't like it please tell me why. i'm not sure if i have anymore ideas for stories but if i come up with any i'll be sure to elaborate on them. until then.)