//?A Curious Sergal: Part 1.001
These will be fixed, but any feedback is nice and streamlines the revision process (so please leave some). also, while the main charecter's name is jax, i just put that in for a temporary name... it will be subject to change in the future.
Replacement (Part 3)
#4 of replacement i'm sure many of you are aware of how this part was before the first revision. for those that don't know, it's best not to say anything until after you've read it. let's just say, i don't write yiffy stuff anymore.
MagnaFlame Renamon 2
((now revised)) magnaflame renamon part 2 as stephen turned around to see what it was, he saw.... "ogremon" he whispered to himself in horror, a shiver going down his spine.
Outfoxed
The first to be revised and the first to get a limited print release. enjoy.
Disclosure
"i'm told that i would do far better with a revised edition. that old volume at least led me to timewind. the other thing that got me here was the sword itself.
Reaching for the Stars - Chapter 38: Home Sweet Home, Part 1
"i'm going to ask for a final revision next week, then propose for defence." ellie seethed at him. "you are so. damn. lucky." martin said as if he were offended. the wolf just shrugged nonchalantly.
ROI: The Pale Snow - Chapter 4
He would destroy any evidence, revise the sagas suitable to newer generations with promise over shame. the ironwoods would be a name of legend, and he would do so gladly. a faint knocking tap from the door caused doran's paw to an abrupt halt.
Reaching for the Stars - Chapter 45: Hollow Spring
He wanted to pull the latest copy of his thesis and ask the wolf about his final revision, but he held back. it was pointless; he didn't want to make the wolf feel bad. "what?" the dog looked at the wolf. "what what?"
Life is Just a Storm- Chapter 27- Perpetual WInds
I... think this chapter may end up being revised the most when i am done. let's just think about that for a moment...... but... here we are guys. final stretch time. one more to go. and i won't let computer issues dampen me too much.
Life is Just a Storm. Chapter 33- One Way to Look
They'll require heavy revising... let's hope that there will be is at least some effort to get back into this! ^^ here is chapter 33. 4,023 words. oh and for the record, chapter 34 is done as well.
The Great War,Hell Division, Heroes Of The Dovahreich Chapter 3
If something has a beginning the thing has an end as well story devised and written by doomfond copyright belongs to doomfond story revision
Castaways - Chapter 2
.^ i spent a little time revising some things and trying my best to polish up the spelling and grammar. i dug this beast out of the depths of my old external hard drive so it was a little gnarly when i first read it.