The Lead Crown: Ch 6c, Ghosts of the Past (Pt 3)
The wolf-dog quickly revised whatever he was going to say, "so... out the back?" sada nodded, "out the back."
Blood, Sweat, and Diesel: Chapter 3
#5 of blood, sweat, and diesel not my best one, but it will do until i have the time for a full revision. update 1/18: made some edits. if memory loss was a symptom of ptsd or any of those other conditions, i certainly didn't get it.
Jon Mahon Chronicles
I wrote this back in like 2009 then revised and extended it later. jon mahon quotes: "hey mahon! none of that, please!" "of course they don't approve of jon mahon. nobody does" "i want to meet this jon mahon" "jon mahon!
A Bronze Rising: Out with the Old
I will revise the story at once!" tobias said, turning his horse about. i raised a paw, "not quite yet. i want you to summon a wood worker here first thing in the morning.
sora's love
The next morning was snowy and foggy as sora got out of bed and headded to the shower to help him wake up he turned on the water and let it run on his fur and made a horrible relization "oh shit today i got exams and i haven't done any revision
Antler to Antler - Part 5 (Revised)
#7 of antler to antler **a/n - normally i don't like to revise work i've already published, but because the intent of antler to antler was as a screenplay which i have yet to produce, the original posting was always intended to be viewed as a draft rather
An Ounce of Hope
It's been revised heavily, but i think it's getting there now. getting saerus to finally talk about himself will take a little while, he's not one to warm up easily.
College life: Chapter 1
#1 of college life _uh yeah, well if you read my journal you'll understand that unfortunately i couldn't focus on revision and ended up spending a shitload of time writing this holiday (which i kind of regret now since my exams start in about 3 weeks).
Be Careful What You Summon For (Revision 1)
5th April, 2017 "You don't actually believe in this stuff do you?" He asked me with comical disbelief. "No but... I couldn't resist picking it up when I saw it at the library." I snatched the book back from him and looked at the cover, 'DEMON...
Avataress Trilogy: Origins and Secrets - #1 Worthy Vessel
#1 of avataress trilogy the sf premiere of the newly revised series the avataress trilogy presenting first with the story from the point of view of the goddess of ultimate strength. **avataress trilogy:** origins and secrets 1.
Splintered Light, Ch 2.4: Unforeseen Circumstances
"i'm certain they have everything perfectly--" captain jacksoni ascended the stairs to the poop deck and tobias quickly revised his choice of words, feeling ill-at-ease about using a pet name with someone else around. "--perfectly in hand...
Twin Shadows(chapter 1)
(this is the post revision by felldewan) it was many, many, many untold years ago during the ancient era of humanity's existence. these years were ones where many things existed that the modern world in the future came to eventually.